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Duel
Brainless bourgeois broad
She called me names - not only
A duel of tongues
Shoot - Hells Angel's bride snapped ...
She called me names - not only
A duel of tongues
Shoot - Hells Angel's bride snapped ...
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Re. Duel
29th Nov 2015 9:04pm
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Oh no, that's a misunderstanding. She shoved me and threatened to smash my face in! I'm quite harmless :-).
Re: Re. Duel
29th Nov 2015 11:55pm
somebody threatened
to beat me up once -
I said, that's enough..!
he said, oh, it will be...
to beat me up once -
I said, that's enough..!
he said, oh, it will be...
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30th Nov 2015 5:29pm
Re. Duel
30th Nov 2015 2:58am
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30th Nov 2015 5:31pm
Re. Duel
*takes off heels, removes earrings, place hair in ponytail, crack knuckles, and neck, stretches legs*
'...where she at?' ;)
Nice Chi!
'...where she at?' ;)
Nice Chi!
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Re: Re. Duel
30th Nov 2015 5:46pm
Oh, fantastic! I can see you, ready to fight! Thanks for the mental help, Rain :-). xoxo
Let's stand our ground!
Let's stand our ground!
Re. Duel
30th Nov 2015 6:57pm
Miss Chi you've elevated Senryu to a martial art...you gave her the 5-7-5 punch in the nose. Bravisima tapferen Dichterin (I hope that's right :)
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Re: Re. Duel
30th Nov 2015 9:19pm
Hahaha! Sweet! Yes, it's 99% correct: tapfere Dichterin :-). Thank you :-)! You speak German!
I love your comment "you gave her the 5-7-5 punch in the nose". Wonderful!
I'm afraid in a real scuffle I wouldn't have had any chance.
I love your comment "you gave her the 5-7-5 punch in the nose". Wonderful!
I'm afraid in a real scuffle I wouldn't have had any chance.