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Haiku your day - Competition hosted by MadameLavender
Saturday
Anticipation
Tasting, not yet devouring
Dancefloor liaison
Sunday
Branches almost bare
Leaves and beechnuts largely gone
Squirrels' ear tufts soaked
Monday
News about Paris
Shocked and numbed, public standstill
Tears come slow but hard
Tuesday
You'll never break us
Just strengthen our resistance
Compassion our arms
Wednesday
Unexpected call
Old familiar paths rerun
Mutual pleasure
Thursday
Afterwork party
Displaying togetherness
French and German peers
Friday
Work and groceries
Not a break from morn to dawn
Weekend is longed for
Anticipation
Tasting, not yet devouring
Dancefloor liaison
Sunday
Branches almost bare
Leaves and beechnuts largely gone
Squirrels' ear tufts soaked
Monday
News about Paris
Shocked and numbed, public standstill
Tears come slow but hard
Tuesday
You'll never break us
Just strengthen our resistance
Compassion our arms
Wednesday
Unexpected call
Old familiar paths rerun
Mutual pleasure
Thursday
Afterwork party
Displaying togetherness
French and German peers
Friday
Work and groceries
Not a break from morn to dawn
Weekend is longed for
Published 22nd Nov 2015
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22nd Nov 2015 1:31am
22nd Nov 2015 1:37am
22nd Nov 2015 1:39am
I read this in the comp and said to myself, "She's a winner!" :)
Loved it! Xo
Loved it! Xo
Awww, you're so sweet, Rain! Thank you so much! Your delight is more worth than any trophy :-).
22nd Nov 2015 1:59am
These are wonderful as always Iris … enjoyed each one … Good luck in the comp … pretty sure you own it !!
23rd Nov 2015 8:27pm
Hehe, JeJe! The comp was over before I submitted the poem :-). But thank you, anyway!
22nd Nov 2015 5:48am
23rd Nov 2015 8:52pm
Thanks, Ahavati! I was indeed lucky :-). The Sunday squirrel was really cute. Took some nice pics of it :-)
22nd Nov 2015 6:09am
23rd Nov 2015 8:53pm
22nd Nov 2015 12:05pm
Love your reflections on the events in Paris ... especially Thursday
Great pieces
ありがとう
Arigatō
Great pieces
ありがとう
Arigatō
23rd Nov 2015 8:59pm
Paris is a tragedy. As I'm working with many French colleagues the attacks have been the topic of the last days. We will not surrender to terror.
Thanks for your kind words, John.
Thanks for your kind words, John.
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2015 4:26pm
Love it! Especially the Sunday Haiku.
23rd Nov 2015 9:00pm
25th Nov 2015 6:33am
I am touched by the poignancy of this piece. How life can run such a gambit in one week's time. From dancing to mourning in the blink of an eye interspersed with interludes of serenity, solidarity and passion. Bravisima Miss Chi!
27th Nov 2015 7:40am
Awww, thank you so much for your insightful and perceptive comment :-). I apprecieate it!
It was an eventful week and writing those haiku for the competition was fun on the one hand and painful on the other.
Just as life itself ...
It was an eventful week and writing those haiku for the competition was fun on the one hand and painful on the other.
Just as life itself ...
