deepundergroundpoetry.com
an embarrassing incident...
she caught me
looking at her
asked me
why
I said let
me go
and I'll
tell you...
Published 24th Nov 2015
| Edited 25th Nov 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 8
reads 654
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
25th Nov 2015 00:03am
aha! Now tell us Paul who was the hunter and who was the prey? ;)
25th Nov 2015 00:09am
25th Nov 2015 2:25am
25th Nov 2015 10:22pm
there ye have it, baby *
* pleas xcuse my hopefully temporary ineloquence in commenting.
as
the only tangible friend i've had for over 4yrs died in my arms early thee other morning. For one so 'used to' having a figurative & literal Broken Heart, i'm nontheless devastated....ha! all over a damn dog (who died of the same disease that almost killed me thrice this spring.)
* pleas xcuse my hopefully temporary ineloquence in commenting.
as
the only tangible friend i've had for over 4yrs died in my arms early thee other morning. For one so 'used to' having a figurative & literal Broken Heart, i'm nontheless devastated....ha! all over a damn dog (who died of the same disease that almost killed me thrice this spring.)
25th Nov 2015 10:24pm
28th Nov 2015 6:44am
I need more here - my head is burning with the question - did she let you go?
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
28th Nov 2015 3:52pm
