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this feeling
fuck this feeling
i refuse to let someone in again
pretend to fall
open your heart
here comes the knife
plunging deep
continuous
couldnt you have just killed me
spilt my guts and take your seed
instead of having a love that still haunts
darkness is all that remains
you took the rose
only thorns remain
fuck this feeling
i refuse to let someone in again.
i refuse to let someone in again
pretend to fall
open your heart
here comes the knife
plunging deep
continuous
couldnt you have just killed me
spilt my guts and take your seed
instead of having a love that still haunts
darkness is all that remains
you took the rose
only thorns remain
fuck this feeling
i refuse to let someone in again.
Published 24th Nov 2015
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2015 10:13pm
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2015 3:21am
amari25,
Getting a definite negative vibe here. You've dug the hole and buried 'maybe' pretty deep!
tornado
Getting a definite negative vibe here. You've dug the hole and buried 'maybe' pretty deep!
tornado
25th Nov 2015 3:49am
25th Nov 2015 9:16am
Only the thorns remain.
Best line out of a very emotional write.
Bravo and very well said.
Best line out of a very emotional write.
Bravo and very well said.
26th Nov 2015 7:44am
