Another heavily alliterative piece. I think either "feel" or "abound" needs to end in an "s" for that first line to make grammatical sense, and the piece as a whole is rather too abstract and metaphorical to be a haiku, which are supposed to be simple natural images. I do like this piece, though, I think. It's one I'll have to return to and study a bit more, maybe read aloud a few times. Thank you for this first read, anyway. xxx
Unfortunately adding an 's' here or there would destroy the whole haiku form adherence. It is a haiku about having a sore throat or dry throat: I should have added a video of me as I felt like this. I am not that fond of using the haiku form, so should put more effort and study into it next time.