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9th Nov 2015 2:35pm
This is a very interesting piece. The imagery is amazing, and the flow is appealing. It was very deep and I find myself wishing I could see it written so that I wouldn't miss the many metaphors you have dealt. I guess I'll just have to settle with multiple listens. This was a great spoken word piece.
11th Nov 2015 00:55am
Thank you kindly for your feedback. It is great to hear others like the poetry that I write.
If you would like to see the poem in written form, one option is to download the PDF (written copy) at wwww.rhythmwithrhymes.co.uk or I could paste it on here if you wish?
If you would like to see the poem in written form, one option is to download the PDF (written copy) at wwww.rhythmwithrhymes.co.uk or I could paste it on here if you wish?
