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IDFK Anything
I shift,
To this ever evolving world.
Not knowing my purpose
Smashing my head against it.
There is no purpose, I hear
There is only living
Full
Content
Extracting my self preservation
Against a negative tide
With a rip to suck all
Into a black hole of 'what's' and 'why's'.
Yearning makes for art
Art makes for enlightenment
Enlightenment makes for peace
Peace is the purpose.
Right?
To this ever evolving world.
Not knowing my purpose
Smashing my head against it.
There is no purpose, I hear
There is only living
Full
Content
Extracting my self preservation
Against a negative tide
With a rip to suck all
Into a black hole of 'what's' and 'why's'.
Yearning makes for art
Art makes for enlightenment
Enlightenment makes for peace
Peace is the purpose.
Right?
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Re. IDFK Anything
2nd Nov 2015 11:44pm
Peace comes when you can love and share that love.
Everything else is noise that you must wade through to get to Peace.
We all suffer through the stages and then one day when you stop worrying about it all, the contentment fills you ....
Powerful introspective write loo xx
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Everything else is noise that you must wade through to get to Peace.
We all suffer through the stages and then one day when you stop worrying about it all, the contentment fills you ....
Powerful introspective write loo xx
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 4:21am
Thanks Mr.P
I'm working very diligently at letting things, that are a waste of space in my brain, go. Same with worry. But sometimes, a little anxiety creeps in. Especially when you decide to change your life and career at 42!
xo
I'm working very diligently at letting things, that are a waste of space in my brain, go. Same with worry. But sometimes, a little anxiety creeps in. Especially when you decide to change your life and career at 42!
xo
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5th Nov 2015 2:30pm
Oh yeah, I hear ya there. I changed at 49 from an inside management person to an on the road salesman, with no car to boot. I get it
I turned 63 today, old dog but keeping young and wearing lots of black of course
Love hearing from you ....
xx
I turned 63 today, old dog but keeping young and wearing lots of black of course
Love hearing from you ....
xx
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 5:30pm
Happy Birthday! Today you should find make an effigy of someone you REALLY don't like. It's about burn'n em down. Isn't it? You fiery Scorpio!
Like you haven't heard the first lines of this a million times, lol. But I had to...
"Remember, remember!
The fifth of November,
The Gunpowder treason and plot;
I know of no reason
Why the Gunpowder treason
Should ever be forgot!
Guy Fawkes and his companions
Did the scheme contrive,
To blow the King and Parliament
All up alive.
Threescore barrels, laid below,
To prove old England's overthrow.
But, by God's providence, him they catch,
With a dark lantern, lighting a match!
A stick and a stake
For King James's sake!
If you won't give me one,
I'll take two,
The better for me,
And the worse for you.
A rope, a rope, to hang the Pope,
A penn'orth of cheese to choke him,
A pint of beer to wash it down,
And a jolly good fire to burn him.
Holloa, boys! holloa, boys! make the bells ring!
Holloa, boys! holloa boys! God save the King!
Hip, hip, hooor-r-r-ray!" - c1870
Like you haven't heard the first lines of this a million times, lol. But I had to...
"Remember, remember!
The fifth of November,
The Gunpowder treason and plot;
I know of no reason
Why the Gunpowder treason
Should ever be forgot!
Guy Fawkes and his companions
Did the scheme contrive,
To blow the King and Parliament
All up alive.
Threescore barrels, laid below,
To prove old England's overthrow.
But, by God's providence, him they catch,
With a dark lantern, lighting a match!
A stick and a stake
For King James's sake!
If you won't give me one,
I'll take two,
The better for me,
And the worse for you.
A rope, a rope, to hang the Pope,
A penn'orth of cheese to choke him,
A pint of beer to wash it down,
And a jolly good fire to burn him.
Holloa, boys! holloa, boys! make the bells ring!
Holloa, boys! holloa boys! God save the King!
Hip, hip, hooor-r-r-ray!" - c1870
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8th Nov 2015 1:44pm
Yes, I hear it every year, my wife is a Brit ....
I've done a lot of burning in my days, looking to mend a few fences now. Going soft you think ? Not really, just can see a few things a little clearer. ....
I tonk you need to move to NYC.....
xx
I've done a lot of burning in my days, looking to mend a few fences now. Going soft you think ? Not really, just can see a few things a little clearer. ....
I tonk you need to move to NYC.....
xx
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Re. IDFK Anything
2nd Nov 2015 11:47pm
Loo, the last stanza is not only beautiful but fervently hoped for. I assure you that you are doing your part. Brava bella poeta!
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 4:25am
GW...thank you. So happy you found beauty in this. I will keep on keep'n on. Cheers!
Re. IDFK Anything
3rd Nov 2015 4:07am
so much confusion swirling in a black hole;
we struggle toward art for many reasons...
we struggle toward art for many reasons...
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 4:28am
Taryn, you understand pretty much everything! Thanks for the love. As always. I hope that you find some peace. I feel I am almost there. Some decisions are just waaaayyyyy harder than others. Loves.
Re. IDFK Anything
3rd Nov 2015 6:37am
Interesting, thought provoking poem. The only meaning in life will be determined after it is lived. Whatever you did with it will be its definition.
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 4:30am
That is so true JJ. I'm glad you found this thought provoking, means I'm doing something right! Thank you.
Re. IDFK Anything
4th Nov 2015 5:07am
You fucking know more than you let on in this insightful piece that is the epitome of soul searching and you got a whole lotta soul for sure !
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Re: Re. IDFK Anything
5th Nov 2015 4:34am
Thank you Tony! I like to think my years have brought me some insight. And I'll just keep on writing bout it. Cheers.
Re. IDFK Anything
9th Jan 2016 1:15am
Great write looloo, yes peace is one of life's kpi's, but without some kind of conflict, you never have context for peace. So balance perhaps is the key. Oh and benevolence - our greatest challenge now in context of evolution is to throw off our shackles of cruelty and callousness and embrace compassion and empathy. We have transcended physical violence as an evolutionary pressure, we just need better marketing.
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10th Jan 2016 7:47pm