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Fallen Angels Dominion
power play over my pussy and soul
the Fallen Angels walk among us
looking like mortal men
they have great powers of persuasion
caught in the middle of this infernal struggle
I want to stay with the one who loves me best
in his dark embrace my lusts fulfilled
popped my cherry marking me as his own
I am owned the new comer encroaches
trying to steal me away coming into enemy territory
placing a strangle hold on me
my Dark Lord has been grooming me
to be his mistress of the shadows
teaching me to fly with wings unseen
taking pride in my seductive advances
he makes me feel warm and secure
tasting of brown sugar
injected into my veins calming me
sure in his place in the hierarchy
he stands proud and true sure of victory
licking me, tasting my flavor of tangerine
lifting my soul from the abyss where I was chained
left in the cold my being raped
loving me tenderly giving me higher rank
I love this Fallen one who seduces
lifts me out of my past addictions
he's standing his ground
when I close my eyes it's his eyes I see
freeing deep sigh of relief his presence felt
caressing, tasting gently lapping at my soft spots
a true gentlemen knows how to seduce and rule
I'm owned the gates set about me
for my protection and wandering eyes
set in the garden of his creation
I run naked laying down at his gentle
insistent command freedom in my binds
Published 2nd Nov 2015
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2nd Nov 2015 3:08am
2nd Nov 2015 4:06am
2nd Nov 2015 3:53am
he brings her out of the devastation, & they are united,
but the torment they must sustain;
perhaps it's a pyrrhic victory...
but the torment they must sustain;
perhaps it's a pyrrhic victory...
2nd Nov 2015 4:08am
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2nd Nov 2015 7:30pm
thank you beautiful one those are my favorite lines as well :)
I love you so much..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxoxo Brenda
2nd Nov 2015 6:34am
2nd Nov 2015 7:31pm
2nd Nov 2015 7:52am
this reminded me a bit of revenant by larissa ione [in the best possible way]
absolutely loved!
xoxox
absolutely loved!
xoxox
2nd Nov 2015 7:33pm
thank you beautiful Katja I had to Google her looking forward to reading her series now..
so happy you enjoyed my Fallen Angel fantasy :)
love Brenda
so happy you enjoyed my Fallen Angel fantasy :)
love Brenda
2nd Nov 2015 9:58am
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2nd Nov 2015 4:24pm
2nd Nov 2015 7:39pm
"licking me, tasting my flavor of tangerine
lifting my soul from the abyss where I was chained"
... - a dark savior.. love the images and freeing passion. cheers, blue angel
lifting my soul from the abyss where I was chained"
... - a dark savior.. love the images and freeing passion. cheers, blue angel
2nd Nov 2015 7:41pm
2nd Nov 2015 6:10pm
Those Fallen Angels do have the power of persuasion, which they have imparted to you, Lady Crim. You serve your Dark Lord well. I serve a Lighter Lord, who delegates Guardian Angels. Fortunately they keep me on a very long leash. Great job Crim!
2nd Nov 2015 7:43pm
thank you Sir Crow for understanding this write and showing it love :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2015 6:19pm
Brenda, totally loved this.. never disappointed reading your work.. into my list it goes, with so many others from you.. you're a brilliant poetess.. with love..
Dave
Dave
2nd Nov 2015 7:44pm
2nd Nov 2015 8:18pm
wow. This is a combination of dark, love and sensual poetry. Pulled it off so well. :)
3rd Nov 2015 4:05am
2nd Nov 2015 9:15pm
Crim, you have such an incredible voice dripping from your pen. Simply wonderful!
"licking me, tasting my flavor of tangerine
lifting my soul from the abyss where I was chained
left in the cold my being raped
loving me tenderly giving me higher rank”<--- this, I loved.
"licking me, tasting my flavor of tangerine
lifting my soul from the abyss where I was chained
left in the cold my being raped
loving me tenderly giving me higher rank”<--- this, I loved.
3rd Nov 2015 4:06am
Brenda your talent always shines through in each write. This a dark sensual write that also has the light of love in it. There are so many wonderful and descriptive lines in this write >
caressing, tasting gently lapping at my soft spots
a true gentlemen knows how to seduce and rule
I'm owned the gates set about me >
Definitely my fav
Enjoyed
Keith
caressing, tasting gently lapping at my soft spots
a true gentlemen knows how to seduce and rule
I'm owned the gates set about me >
Definitely my fav
Enjoyed
Keith
3rd Nov 2015 4:07am
3rd Nov 2015 2:51am
first line really knocked me for six (in a good way) - I would think 'the master' will be best pleased or maybe he'd just join in - be interesting to hear you write about that kind of conflict (Just and idea) :-)
as always you write so well, like a good book you just can't put down :-)
as always you write so well, like a good book you just can't put down :-)
3rd Nov 2015 4:08am
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2015 3:18pm
No one can do dark and erotic in equal proportions like you do Brenda.
Reinging queen in this medium. Beautifully penned.
Reinging queen in this medium. Beautifully penned.
9th Nov 2015 11:54pm
3rd Nov 2015 5:57pm
You have tenderness in your words. Soft thoughts caressed your heart behind your eyelids. Excellent write Crim.
9th Nov 2015 11:55pm
4th Nov 2015 00:44am
One who can inhale tainted past
Taste the distain and crave more
Is indeed a Master of the heart
And the cure of broken souls
Beautiful write Crim
Taste the distain and crave more
Is indeed a Master of the heart
And the cure of broken souls
Beautiful write Crim
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