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One Touch
Today, I touched you
for the first time...
Small thing, just
a hand to the hip...
Innocent...no reason..
just a slip.
That's what I tell
myself....then these
random thoughts
of you begin..
So soft to the
touch you were;
no retreat nor
was one asked for.
In that moment
thoughts rushed
through...more
thoughts of
touching you
Your lips...
How sweet?
Your kiss...
a tasty treat?
Your hand...
in mine.
Holding you..
for a time.
My fingers in
your hair......
Kissing you
softly there.
Hands caressing
your face,
fingers around
your lips trace.
Eyes locked
in a gaze,
causing desires
to blaze.
All from one
hand to a hip...
mind running wild.....
what a trip.
for the first time...
Small thing, just
a hand to the hip...
Innocent...no reason..
just a slip.
That's what I tell
myself....then these
random thoughts
of you begin..
So soft to the
touch you were;
no retreat nor
was one asked for.
In that moment
thoughts rushed
through...more
thoughts of
touching you
Your lips...
How sweet?
Your kiss...
a tasty treat?
Your hand...
in mine.
Holding you..
for a time.
My fingers in
your hair......
Kissing you
softly there.
Hands caressing
your face,
fingers around
your lips trace.
Eyes locked
in a gaze,
causing desires
to blaze.
All from one
hand to a hip...
mind running wild.....
what a trip.
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Re. One Touch
31st Oct 2015 1:48pm
Very sweet Keith! I love seeing the softer side of DUs poets. It proves everyone has a heart. 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. One Touch
31st Oct 2015 2:30pm
So glad you liked, it is so funny the effects certain innocent moments can have on us. It was getting late, but my mind was full of her. So this little write is the result. Love and appreciate you
so.
Keith
so.
Keith
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Re: Re. One Touch
31st Oct 2015 5:12pm
Sweetheart, I certainly know what you
mean. I am so glad that this time
it was good for you. Your are always
so good for me. Love and thanks.
Keith
mean. I am so glad that this time
it was good for you. Your are always
so good for me. Love and thanks.
Keith
Re. One Touch
31st Oct 2015 7:39pm
Re: Re. One Touch
31st Oct 2015 9:18pm
Thank you Brenda, trying to be a little more upbeat on my last two offerings.
I am not really sure that fits into my comfort zone. Everyone is not as vesatile as you. I appreciate your kind comment. :)
Keith
I am not really sure that fits into my comfort zone. Everyone is not as vesatile as you. I appreciate your kind comment. :)
Keith
Re. One Touch
1st Nov 2015 5:56pm
Oh my Keith, this is all kinds of tenderness. Simply lovely. Enjoyed!
Pen love~
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Re: Re. One Touch
1st Nov 2015 7:54pm
I would like to thank you for showing this write kindness. I so glad that you felt the tenderness of the write. Really appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Thank you
Again,
Keith
Thank you
Again,
Keith
Re. One Touch
All it takes is a simple glance into someones else's eyes and BAM! You're hooked. Loved it, K. <3
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Re: Re. One Touch
4th Nov 2015 3:46am
My Lady, I am so pleased that you liked and I truly am glad you
took your time to read
Keith
took your time to read
Keith
Re. One Touch
3rd Nov 2015 5:51pm
"Small thing, just
a hand to the hip..."
~this is so damn poignant.. soft and still bold..
sweet hells can be in the simple complexity of a touch, and the small unintentionals seem
to speak loudly if we listen & more haunting if in memory, maybe.
I love this piece! tender & soo You, Keith! -meaning exceptional o'course ;)
in luvin awwes,
~d
a hand to the hip..."
~this is so damn poignant.. soft and still bold..
sweet hells can be in the simple complexity of a touch, and the small unintentionals seem
to speak loudly if we listen & more haunting if in memory, maybe.
I love this piece! tender & soo You, Keith! -meaning exceptional o'course ;)
in luvin awwes,
~d
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Re. One Touch
4th Nov 2015 3:51am
You are too sweet to me. I have missed your presence immensely
as I am sure everyone else has.
Sure look forward to hearing from you again soon. Really look forward to reading you again, love.
Thank you
So..
Keith
as I am sure everyone else has.
Sure look forward to hearing from you again soon. Really look forward to reading you again, love.
Thank you
So..
Keith
Re. One Touch
5th Nov 2015 2:30am
Hi Keith! Ahhh...that first touch...opens ups the world...you have captured that feeling so well.
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Re: Re. One Touch
7th Nov 2015 3:46am
Thank you sweet Shauna for stopping by and leaving a few words .
Always look forward to hearing from you and looking forward to reading you again soon..
Keith
Always look forward to hearing from you and looking forward to reading you again soon..
Keith