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ABCs of a Thug
Affirming Bullets
Clandestine Deals
Erupting Fights
Getaway Highs
Inglorious Jackasses
keen & lose
Morose, Nocturnal
Opportunistic
Prudes
Quintessential Rouges
Satiate Thirst
Unworthy Vermin
Worst Xenophobe, yearning
Zooming Away
Bastards, Cunning.
Clandestine Deals
Erupting Fights
Getaway Highs
Inglorious Jackasses
keen & lose
Morose, Nocturnal
Opportunistic
Prudes
Quintessential Rouges
Satiate Thirst
Unworthy Vermin
Worst Xenophobe, yearning
Zooming Away
Bastards, Cunning.
Published 23rd Oct 2015
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23rd Oct 2015 5:58am
Awesome rhyme. Loved it. Beaut flow... didn't look like there's any extreme content in the poem Aarti....
23rd Oct 2015 6:35am
23rd Oct 2015 10:15am
Very vert cool Aarti...the word "thug" this is an indian word Americans have adopted and here though it does have a ruthless criminal connotation, we have changed it drastically from its original meaning in your country.
Powerful collection of descriptive words doll..very nice flow.
Well done.
Love
Jennifer
Powerful collection of descriptive words doll..very nice flow.
Well done.
Love
Jennifer
23rd Oct 2015 10:50am
your poem earlier inspired me to write like this Jen. Oh I get really confused between Indian English, British English and American English. Hahahaha. But I did not know this. I am glad you shared this with me. :D
23rd Oct 2015 1:48pm
Oh! Very cool sweetheart! Thanks so much for telling me...And the extreme content can be used for things other than sex if you feel this speaks to violence that you find extreme. Just in case that was what you had in mind...
Very nice Aarti..thinkin of you dove.
Very nice Aarti..thinkin of you dove.
23rd Oct 2015 2:17pm
The extreme content happened by accident and I dont know how to undo it! :)
Same here sweet Jen. :)
Same here sweet Jen. :)
