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Moment of truth
The heart drinks her sorrows away
to convince herself she's not afraid
to break, while stagnant
rivers of blood lay still
The temperature drops again
In the meantime silence makes
it's self known
Frozen, this moment of truth
When the fact of the matter is
She made her last beat
Before emptying her glass
to convince herself she's not afraid
to break, while stagnant
rivers of blood lay still
The temperature drops again
In the meantime silence makes
it's self known
Frozen, this moment of truth
When the fact of the matter is
She made her last beat
Before emptying her glass
Published 23rd Oct 2015
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2015 4:00pm
This made the whole poem come alive . . .
"She made her last beat
Before emptying her glass"
An ending quite remarkable.
"She made her last beat
Before emptying her glass"
An ending quite remarkable.
23rd Oct 2015 7:20pm
lovely Ina such a beautiful write, so poignant..
the ending really tugged at my heart feel the sorrow of this write..
love Brenda
the ending really tugged at my heart feel the sorrow of this write..
love Brenda
23rd Oct 2015 11:16pm
Thank You, Brenda I was a bit down when I wrote that one. Thanks for reading
