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When I'm with you
five senses merge
to one..
Suddenly I see, without looking
Hear, without listening
Feel, without touching
And, the only thing I smell
Is the blissful scent of
Heat...
And, the only taste there is ..
Is lust
Leaving me
tangled in your
web
As I salivate between both sets of lips..
they part for you.
Anticipating all the things. ..
that I crave.
Consumed by a hunger
that can only be satisfied
by your flesh..
Taking mine.
When we merge to
one
Published 12th Oct 2015
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13th Oct 2015 7:07pm
Yes.......absolutely. The nothing in the knowing the absence of consciousness in making love to "the one". No thinking required, just feeling. I wrote something, not quite as sensual as this but it's underlying theme is essentially the same lol you should read it:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/218459-in-and-out-mutual-masturbation-of-the/
Love your writing
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/218459-in-and-out-mutual-masturbation-of-the/
Love your writing
13th Oct 2015 8:09pm
