Crimsin Tides

Crimsin you truly are a brave person this poem is poof that you can put your feelings out there and let us all get to know you a little better. You have inspired me to do the same. Stay strong and stay away form assholes...

Thanks for sharing

thank you DP for a great comment and advise :)

with love Crim

I cry but my tears  
stay frozen inside  
never to grace my cheeks   <3

my guardian is dejure :)

thank you Dejure and I definitely relate..

love Crim

Ms Brenda, enjoyed this revealing this write about yourself in your own words. You reveal the many sides of yourself daily through your writings. That why I have said that you are a beautiful and complex mind. This reinforces what you pour out each and every time you write.
Thankful for having the opportunity to get to know you.

Keith

thank you Keith for such beautiful comments on this write and showing me love :)

love Brenda

Miss Crim, my allies Diva of Darkness. . .you've just blown me away with this poem!. . .*beautiful, just beautiful*. . .xo, Devlin.

thank you Lady Devlin I take that as a high compliment :)

with love Crim

I will enjoy finding all the meaning within this piece (:

thank you kindly for reading me :)

with love Crim

sad poetry rolling in on the tides tonight, Crim;
don't let it diminish your armor...

thank you John I won't..

love Crim

Shit I'm partial to this side moreso...why? Uhm well let's just say uhm... Nah lets not! lol still both sides ROCK! :)

thank you Poe for loving me.

with love Crim

We all need a protector
you're covered

Like the confessional tone with a chaser of "I don't give a fuck"

Hardcore Like
It's what we do, who we are
you inspired me
my return is soon
thank you B
x

thank you Poet happy to have inspired :)

love Brenda

A very honest open piece Crim...revealing and vulnerable...blood shall gather into hand blood; her dark wings shrouding the truth of innocence...longing; crimson shall coat her tongue for the flavor of the wicked satisfies not her hunger; instead rage consumes; for only the innocent man; untainted leaving the taste of truth in her mouth shall stand unscathed in the fury

thank you Sir for such a poetic comment :)

love Crim

Nor do I see any reason for an extreme content label on your piece dear...other than a few swear words

thank you I tried to un-flag this poem but wasn't able to..

love Crim

Love this so much

thank you graciously Kavik :)

love Brenda

crim,

Love being blown away by you dark, salty, don't give a fuck self!

tornado

thank you Tornado for putting a wicked grin on my face :)

with love Crim

I'm always delighted to see your tenderness Brenda.  But I also love the mighty Crimsin, who supplies back up to you and thrills to the general population.  This is an amazing self-portrait of both your sides, light and dark.  The tide's coming in...............

thank you Sir Crow for showing love to both sides of me :)

with love Crim

I have love for you and crim in equal measure - you both write beautiful poetry that sings and screams and sometimes does both, either way it always affects me

you truly are the consummate wordsmith :-)

thank you most kindly David :)

with love Crim

Vulnerability worn like a precious jewel. I admire the baring of your soul as always, Crim.

thank you Atakti for such a beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

Wow, I identify with this piece all too closely. So often when I read your more personal pieces like this, I think to myself, "Did I write this...???" it's so close to how I feel and think. The first stanza was like a kick in the teeth to me.

I particularly love
"I stand stoic    
as stone  
though I crumble"

Lovely piece, my dear! <3

thank you Harlie glad I'm not the only one who feels this way though I feel for your heart..

appreciate the love you've shown this write :)

with love Crim

Very well written Crim I love it....

Love the photo!!

Gdgurl :)

thank you most kindly lovely lady :)

with love Crim

"I cry but my tears  
stay frozen inside  
never to grace my cheeks". Breathtaking reveal. Love the picture too, embracing and awaiting the thrill from all sides of the poet. My greedy thoughts devour this, blue angel

thank you graciously lovely Angel :)

with love Crim

thank you beautiful one for loving all sides of me and such a wonderful comment you mean the world to me :)

I love you..

xoxoxo Brenda

Brenda, this is brilliant.. Crimsin, will always protect you.. don't be afraid to let Brenda out.. just know Crim has your back.. into the list it goes.. with love..



Dave

thank you Dave for getting this write and showing me love :)

love Brenda

inspiring, your ink approaches the world unclothed, you need a hard shell to protect the tender fruit within...

thank you Dean for such a beautifully poetic comment making me smile :)

with love Brenda