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I am a poppy
heart
tongue
nude
pale
blush
shiver
five fingers bloom opium scented
skin
our empress in golden flaked lipstick
climbs her divinely blessed throne
and sways
sways on a bloody wind
tongue
nude
pale
blush
shiver
five fingers bloom opium scented
skin
our empress in golden flaked lipstick
climbs her divinely blessed throne
and sways
sways on a bloody wind
Published 10th Oct 2015
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10th Oct 2015 9:07am
it's a surreal piece of art.
'nude' would work better than 'undressed.' pale, blush, & shiver flow more precisely from nude...
'nude' would work better than 'undressed.' pale, blush, & shiver flow more precisely from nude...
10th Oct 2015 9:03pm
I agree on 'nude', it does work better. At first it didn't strike me as surreal, but looking back on it, I feel it does express that. Thank you so much.
11th Oct 2015 2:07am
Anonymous
11th Oct 2015 6:48am
*brilliant* piece of poetry, Kimchi. . .I love your Asian/Korean English use of words. . .Impressed. . .Devlin.
11th Oct 2015 8:18pm
25th May 2016 4:08am
27th May 2016 6:01pm
This actually makes me very happy that you could have both of those experiences from it. Thank you so much for the stop by and read through.
