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Raw and Moaning
You rubbed it raw for me, you said.
You moaned for me on Audio.
Your pussy lips puffy and red,
You said this was my private show.
You told me to think of a rose
With tuft, pulling back lips for me.
Said you were never meant for clothes,
That you were only meant to please.
Only wearing waist-length black hair,
And hunger in those soft green eyes;
Was more than your soul you laid bare,
As you lie back spreading those thighs.
Oh yes, I still hear that moaning,
And in truth, just can't decide whether
I should be happy or groaning...
Files dated 'fore we were back together.
Not that there could be any shame
To things done while we were apart.
But showing me, lying about date,
Takes lack of conscience to an art.
My dear, why does this bother me?
I should be used to it by now.
Ne'er a moaner before you see,
Should thank you for teaching me how.
A pleaser indeed, that you are.
At least my love you know your call.
Nothing of my heart left to scar,
Go ahead, darlin, please them all!
10/09/15
Published 10th Oct 2015
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10th Oct 2015 3:17am
i had an ex who cheated, darndest thing is, he learned some really neat oral tricks with her & brought them back to me lulz ah, like one doesn't notice a new move in the sack aha
this is a beautifully written accusation, good to be reading you again mister sighs
xoxox
this is a beautifully written accusation, good to be reading you again mister sighs
xoxox
10th Oct 2015 5:52pm
"like one doesn't notice a new move in the sack aha "
Lol... indeed! At least you got something out of it I guess. Wasn't really cheating if it was done while we were apart...just thought it kind of tasteless to present me with such a gift, lying about the date taken, and claiming it was for me. Could have just made a fresh one might think. Thanks for the visit and the reply, dear. :)
Michael
Lol... indeed! At least you got something out of it I guess. Wasn't really cheating if it was done while we were apart...just thought it kind of tasteless to present me with such a gift, lying about the date taken, and claiming it was for me. Could have just made a fresh one might think. Thanks for the visit and the reply, dear. :)
Michael
10th Oct 2015 8:33pm
10th Oct 2015 9:10pm
Lol... getting better at it, ain't I, Ahavati? If only I could displace this need to return to this particular pain again and again. Thank you for the words of approval, they mean much to me.
Michael
Michael
Michael, I too am glad to see you
again, miss reading you. There is always so much heart put into your writes. I think you leave a bit of yourself in the lines. Best wishes
my friend.
Keith
again, miss reading you. There is always so much heart put into your writes. I think you leave a bit of yourself in the lines. Best wishes
my friend.
Keith
11th Oct 2015 1:21am
"I think you leave a bit of yourself in the lines"
Am definitely guilty of that, Keith. Poetry is my soul... just wish it didn't have to bleed so much. :) thank you for the visit and the kind words.
Michael
Am definitely guilty of that, Keith. Poetry is my soul... just wish it didn't have to bleed so much. :) thank you for the visit and the kind words.
Michael
