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Morality?
Morals
What a word...
What a disgusting word
What a sick utterly disgusting word
Perhaps
Perhaps not...
What are morals?
They are weird things
Things that people keep
To maintain an idea of order
Order?
What a joke...
People trying to keep order
Perhaps morals is an illusion
To keep order
Who knows about this morality?
What a word...
What a disgusting word
What a sick utterly disgusting word
Perhaps
Perhaps not...
What are morals?
They are weird things
Things that people keep
To maintain an idea of order
Order?
What a joke...
People trying to keep order
Perhaps morals is an illusion
To keep order
Who knows about this morality?
Published 7th Oct 2015
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7th Oct 2015 7:52pm
Thanks a lot for the critic. I edited my whole poem just for you. I think I was just really tired...I see the errors of my ways
Order what a joke.
Hmmm. Better.
It makes sense.
Will take down original. Respect you for taking pretty harsh words and applying them
Hmmm. Better.
It makes sense.
Will take down original. Respect you for taking pretty harsh words and applying them
Anonymous
7th Oct 2015 9:48pm
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8th Oct 2015 11:38am
Greg,
Again, profound thoughts. I could mistake you to be one of them modern-day-philosophers. I suggest you to dwell deeper into these amazing ideas of truth, morality, rules, the "right thing to do" etc.that you have. It will take you a long way!
Again, profound thoughts. I could mistake you to be one of them modern-day-philosophers. I suggest you to dwell deeper into these amazing ideas of truth, morality, rules, the "right thing to do" etc.that you have. It will take you a long way!
9th Oct 2015 8:31am
Me? A modern day philosopher...I've barely studied philosophy. I know of a few ideas yes. But I only explore such topics as I feel that the ideas that people take for granted are vague at best. I will try to explore them in more detail...Thanks for the support aarti
9th Oct 2015 7:32am
I assume you have read Edgar Allan Poe's The Tell-Tale heart. The poem reminds me of the last bit of that. When the man in the stories mind was clearly becoming unhinged as his internal monologue become more panicked and erratic, seconded guessing his every thought.
Maybe when I read it tomorrow I will feel something different but tonight it reminded me of that and I enjoyed it. Thanks
Maybe when I read it tomorrow I will feel something different but tonight it reminded me of that and I enjoyed it. Thanks
