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Death Is Never The Answer
We build bridges out of crimson blocks
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Verse: Put down the gun, step away from the rope
All you really need is a little hope
No family wants to get that call
No body wants to see you fall
No blood can wash away the pain
To some people it's a little game
Drop the knife, step away from the road
No one wants to see a dead kid ya know
The death toll keeps on going
Pain is growing
Up and up and up
Step away from the bridge, get off that roof
Life's not that bad to tell you the truth
So stand up and look forward. Look for a dream to live for
All you need is a little hope nothing more
Look past your pain,
Get back on the main train
Chores: We build bridges out of crimson blocks
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Verse:
You can't take it,
You can't change it
You can't blame them
You can change them
You can hate them
You can haunt them
They can tease you
They can bruise you
They can break you
They can hate you
But you're stronger
Then they realize
You can fight back
You can break their
Spell over
You right now
Just cover
Your ears now
Close your eyes
Count to ten (Counting to ten in the background)
Collect your mind
No need to
Say goodbye
Clear your mind now
Just zone out
Never
Say goodbye
Just smile
Cause you're fine now
Just fine now
Chores: We build bridges out of crimson blocks
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Death is never the answer
Never the answer
Cause Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Verse: Put down the gun, step away from the rope
All you really need is a little hope
No family wants to get that call
No body wants to see you fall
No blood can wash away the pain
To some people it's a little game
Drop the knife, step away from the road
No one wants to see a dead kid ya know
The death toll keeps on going
Pain is growing
Up and up and up
Step away from the bridge, get off that roof
Life's not that bad to tell you the truth
So stand up and look forward. Look for a dream to live for
All you need is a little hope nothing more
Look past your pain,
Get back on the main train
Chores: We build bridges out of crimson blocks
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Verse:
You can't take it,
You can't change it
You can't blame them
You can change them
You can hate them
You can haunt them
They can tease you
They can bruise you
They can break you
They can hate you
But you're stronger
Then they realize
You can fight back
You can break their
Spell over
You right now
Just cover
Your ears now
Close your eyes
Count to ten (Counting to ten in the background)
Collect your mind
No need to
Say goodbye
Clear your mind now
Just zone out
Never
Say goodbye
Just smile
Cause you're fine now
Just fine now
Chores: We build bridges out of crimson blocks
Underneath rivers of crimson drops
Death is never the answer
but it's all we've got
Life seems so fun till we are out of luck
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Death is never the answer
Never the answer
Cause Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Outside you're crying, inside you're dying
(Whoa ho ho ho ho)
Published 7th Oct 2015
| Edited 28th Feb 2016
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10th Oct 2015 7:24pm
15th Feb 2016 1:23pm
Dragonmaster Valcary, luv ~ :-*
This is a remarkable song you've written. It seems to me you write from a place of knowledge and that is oft-times the best place from which to write, luv. The insight is hard-won and blistering, but the journey out is worth the travail, I've found. :-*
You've written it with grace and hope and a bit of radiant illumination as well, luv.
There are a couple places where I'd proofread and clean up a tad; aside from that, you're golden. If you'd like, I'll aid with that; if not, no worries. :-*
Finally, luv, I'd like to hear this one if you're inclined to share. I have a hunch it's quite remarkable to hear as well...
This is a remarkable song you've written. It seems to me you write from a place of knowledge and that is oft-times the best place from which to write, luv. The insight is hard-won and blistering, but the journey out is worth the travail, I've found. :-*
You've written it with grace and hope and a bit of radiant illumination as well, luv.
There are a couple places where I'd proofread and clean up a tad; aside from that, you're golden. If you'd like, I'll aid with that; if not, no worries. :-*
Finally, luv, I'd like to hear this one if you're inclined to share. I have a hunch it's quite remarkable to hear as well...
26th Feb 2016 8:34am
Firstly thanks Savaja, Secondly I'd love it if you could help with the proofreading and Lastly I still don't have a set beat for it, only ideas.
You are most welcome, luv. This is quite a remarkable piece. :-*
Edits: "relies" should be"realize" and following that, you say, "Cause your fine now" ~ "your" should be you're
Throughout, adjust
Why does it hurt so much when your minds numb and your hearts so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skins showing that crimson stuff
to
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Minor edits really, luv. Just a bit of clean-up. I rather adore this piece... :-*
You are quite talented. Please continue to play with those beats, luv; try them out. You've somewhat extraordinary and oh-so-worthwhile here. So, so many need to hear this...
Edits: "relies" should be"realize" and following that, you say, "Cause your fine now" ~ "your" should be you're
Throughout, adjust
Why does it hurt so much when your minds numb and your hearts so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skins showing that crimson stuff
to
Why does it hurt so much when your mind's numb and your heart's so dark
Why does it hurt so much when your skin's showing that crimson stuff
Minor edits really, luv. Just a bit of clean-up. I rather adore this piece... :-*
You are quite talented. Please continue to play with those beats, luv; try them out. You've somewhat extraordinary and oh-so-worthwhile here. So, so many need to hear this...
28th Feb 2016 00:22am
You seem to be a great person. I hope you have happiness in your life right now.Thank you for everything. When I have a beat I'll let you know.
