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The Poet's Secret
I whisper in your ear.
The left one.
The one with the cute roundness
And the small lobe
And its intricate folds
Close to the lovely angled jaw
Along the graceful lines of your neck
Laying on our right sides
While I wrap my arms around you
From behind
Resting my hands on your
Beautiful breasts
Tracing your nipples
With my lightly calloused fingertips
As my voice travels
From my lips saying
"Imagining it all
Can you feel my bulge
Resting in the valley of your hills?"
I grab your delicate small chin
Turn your face
Establish eye contact
To know you heard me
And feel me
As I spread your pussy
And place the tip at the entrance
And just slightly further
Watching your face move
From serene to amorous
I stare into your green eyes and tell you
"It's You that I write about in my poems.
Do you know that?"
I slide my cock a little further inside you
Your mouth opens but no words escape
I nod knowing that opened the dam
To let your waters flow
Running my hand through
The course of your black hair.
A meaningful pull back of the head
As I thrust deep inside
Your damp pleasures
Vibrating all around my pillar
We both take a quick inhalation
Breathy together
Small beads of sweat start to form
The temperature has risen some degrees
I bite gently on your ear and then
I whisper in your ear,
“Would you like to hear how this poem ends?"
The left one.
The one with the cute roundness
And the small lobe
And its intricate folds
Close to the lovely angled jaw
Along the graceful lines of your neck
Laying on our right sides
While I wrap my arms around you
From behind
Resting my hands on your
Beautiful breasts
Tracing your nipples
With my lightly calloused fingertips
As my voice travels
From my lips saying
"Imagining it all
Can you feel my bulge
Resting in the valley of your hills?"
I grab your delicate small chin
Turn your face
Establish eye contact
To know you heard me
And feel me
As I spread your pussy
And place the tip at the entrance
And just slightly further
Watching your face move
From serene to amorous
I stare into your green eyes and tell you
"It's You that I write about in my poems.
Do you know that?"
I slide my cock a little further inside you
Your mouth opens but no words escape
I nod knowing that opened the dam
To let your waters flow
Running my hand through
The course of your black hair.
A meaningful pull back of the head
As I thrust deep inside
Your damp pleasures
Vibrating all around my pillar
We both take a quick inhalation
Breathy together
Small beads of sweat start to form
The temperature has risen some degrees
I bite gently on your ear and then
I whisper in your ear,
“Would you like to hear how this poem ends?"
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Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 00:26am
I love this tender erotic write DPW and giggled at the way you ended it ;)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 00:48am
;) I am glad you liked that ending, Crim. I wrote this poem about you, didn't you know?
Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 3:07am
This begins with fine detail, just focusing on the whorls of her ear and the sculpted lines of her neck and jaw. Things heat up from there considerably but you conduct yourself like a gentleman with the slow entry and tender bite. Her green eyes widen in gratitude. The final three lines are a delight from a true poet. She'll love you for this if she doesn't already DPW. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 3:11am
Thank you again Crow. Certainly intended to be gentle with a few thrusty words to get the heat brewing. But yes. She is every bit as lovely as you imagine.
Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 3:22am
I loved the details ; they say the devil is in the details. The details tell
of someone quite special. Nothing like dark hair and green eyes. Sounds like a special intimate moment was had my friend.
Lucky you!
K2M
of someone quite special. Nothing like dark hair and green eyes. Sounds like a special intimate moment was had my friend.
Lucky you!
K2M
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 1:48pm
Thank you K2M. It was an intimate moment. The devil may be in the details, but god is in the orgasm. Take you pick.
Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 4:48am
the hills in moonlight, smooth vibrations in the valley.
gentle sexuality...
gentle sexuality...
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 5:09am
Thank you JF for stopping by and reading.
Your comment rings true, though.
Your comment rings true, though.
Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 7:14am
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7th Oct 2015 2:24pm
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
7th Oct 2015 11:51pm
Thank you Taryn. Always wonderful to have you presence. I am happy you found it so receptive. I wrote this about you, did you know?
Re. The Poet's Secret
I have no doubt she knows. This is so subtle and yet pulls so hard... a beautiful poem, and really enjoyed the perspective. Secrets can be wonderful sometimes. May the stars shine on you both.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
9th Oct 2015 5:01pm
The stars are an unbiased luminary. It lights us all. I appreciate your comment and read.
Re. The Poet's Secret
9th Oct 2015 2:34pm
I think ..
I just swallowed
the biggest
lump ever felt in
my life.. so I know
the universe felt
it too
Do forgive my
laughter, its
just.. just wow..
its sensual,
yet dirty..
cellular mutating
mmh quite the
portrait my
drunkenplay..
-Howlings
I just swallowed
the biggest
lump ever felt in
my life.. so I know
the universe felt
it too
Do forgive my
laughter, its
just.. just wow..
its sensual,
yet dirty..
cellular mutating
mmh quite the
portrait my
drunkenplay..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
10th Oct 2015 00:37am
I love to read your reactions.
I was searching for that privacy that is not on stage, or dreamt up.
Privacy has both elements of sensuality and dirtiness.
I am glad you enjoyed this. I wrote this poem about you, didn't you know?
I was searching for that privacy that is not on stage, or dreamt up.
Privacy has both elements of sensuality and dirtiness.
I am glad you enjoyed this. I wrote this poem about you, didn't you know?
Re. The Poet's Secret
9th Oct 2015 5:42pm
omfs.. that's one lucky fly on your wall!! ;)
you have captured the essence of sensual intimacy in silky soft caresses..
each line adds a new layer and image.. and, yes, poetry sighs to your title.
"And place the tip at the entrance
And just slightly further
Watching your face move
From serene to amorous"
~ this stunning set is my fave. the awareness is beautiful..
"Turn your face
Establish eye contact
To know you heard me
And feel me"
~gentle yet in control.. a sexy close up.. the passion clear. *pen powers misters
poignant weave of love play, major darlin.. outstanding write as always..
pls pardon my tardies.. was abit sickies but very glad to catch your softer side today.
everlow curtsy,
~d
you have captured the essence of sensual intimacy in silky soft caresses..
each line adds a new layer and image.. and, yes, poetry sighs to your title.
"And place the tip at the entrance
And just slightly further
Watching your face move
From serene to amorous"
~ this stunning set is my fave. the awareness is beautiful..
"Turn your face
Establish eye contact
To know you heard me
And feel me"
~gentle yet in control.. a sexy close up.. the passion clear. *pen powers misters
poignant weave of love play, major darlin.. outstanding write as always..
pls pardon my tardies.. was abit sickies but very glad to catch your softer side today.
everlow curtsy,
~d
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
10th Oct 2015 00:50am
darksighs,
You are always on time, never late.
Intimacy is indeed what this is about. A close-up! Where details become larger. You pegged it correctly.
It is those lovely moments that surprise us that retain their clarity and unadulterated by wish or fantasy.
Hope you get better soon and bless us with your magic writes. Thank you.
You are always on time, never late.
Intimacy is indeed what this is about. A close-up! Where details become larger. You pegged it correctly.
It is those lovely moments that surprise us that retain their clarity and unadulterated by wish or fantasy.
Hope you get better soon and bless us with your magic writes. Thank you.
Re. The Poet's Secret
11th Oct 2015 7:08am
That's why we do it. Every line and dimension delivered us why we grow the skill. Write how you love and bring it home!
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11th Oct 2015 3:26pm
Re. The Poet's Secret
Anonymous
12th Oct 2015 7:35pm
You certainly expressed the,need, desire, as well as the animal lust.
You have captured the moment of truth.
Very well done!
Big applause.
You have captured the moment of truth.
Very well done!
Big applause.
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Re: Re. The Poet's Secret
12th Oct 2015 9:22pm
Thank you slowgasm. A humble appreciation of your presence. Thank you for the comment and read.