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Crazy Lady
You make me feel like a crazy lady.
The innuendos posted
Like runway lights
On a tarmac at night.
Guiding me in
Easing the landing
This bird,
Is not made of metal.
Remember that.
That,
Would be good.
The innuendos posted
Like runway lights
On a tarmac at night.
Guiding me in
Easing the landing
This bird,
Is not made of metal.
Remember that.
That,
Would be good.
Published 5th Oct 2015
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5th Oct 2015 7:56pm
I like this Loo. "This bird is not made of metal" to me evokes the idea that the human heart is made of more tender, fragile stuff. Brava Lpp.
Anonymous
5th Oct 2015 8:03pm
looloolookie,
I don't think there would be any problem remembering that, seeing you ease down into that landing ;-) Enjoyed the ride on 'crazy lady' airlines.
tornado
I don't think there would be any problem remembering that, seeing you ease down into that landing ;-) Enjoyed the ride on 'crazy lady' airlines.
tornado
6th Oct 2015 1:42am
12th Jan 2016 8:22pm
Great poem looloo - message succinctly delivered in the abstract - I hope they were respectful of your robust delicacy after this little missive.
