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But to love a God,
And to live beyond,
The confusion that rules below,
To be absolute, in a perfect flame
To love one that has not a single name,
And I,
to be, a man,
to live, beneath
The rules, above,
Built and depraved,
The mind,
My sun, how he burns,
The minds wheels, perpetually turned,
To right a wrong, and steal back what was returned,
From beyond the wall,
Loved and scarred an eternally seared
And back to dust,
Shall I be again be scarred upon thorns ash and rose
And to live beyond,
The confusion that rules below,
To be absolute, in a perfect flame
To love one that has not a single name,
And I,
to be, a man,
to live, beneath
The rules, above,
Built and depraved,
The mind,
My sun, how he burns,
The minds wheels, perpetually turned,
To right a wrong, and steal back what was returned,
From beyond the wall,
Loved and scarred an eternally seared
And back to dust,
Shall I be again be scarred upon thorns ash and rose
Published 2nd Oct 2015
| Edited 3rd Oct 2015
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12th Dec 2016 3:41am
Quite the moving piece--I enjoyed reading it for its simplicity but also its depth. Builds up to a powerful ending.
15th Dec 2016 3:17am
Hello Shanegros4, how are you... Thank you, I remember writing this one, it felt good writing this one, almost as if getting something of my chest, a big reason for the simplicity, as if writing something in ones journal or personal letters... take good care man: deadwolf
