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Breaking Point
Past the breaking point.
Standing on the edge.
Ready to jump.
Take away my heartache.
Barely hanging on.
Take one step front.
Leaning forward.
My feet, slowly losing grip.
Arms straight out, leaning forward.
A giant leap.
Rapidly falling.
I'm so alone.
Splat........
I hit the bottom.
Lying there suffering.
Not dead!
Someone come along and.....
Do me in!!!
Standing on the edge.
Ready to jump.
Take away my heartache.
Barely hanging on.
Take one step front.
Leaning forward.
My feet, slowly losing grip.
Arms straight out, leaning forward.
A giant leap.
Rapidly falling.
I'm so alone.
Splat........
I hit the bottom.
Lying there suffering.
Not dead!
Someone come along and.....
Do me in!!!
Published 30th Sep 2015
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1st Oct 2015 5:30am
"Splat... I hit the bottom. Lying there suffering." I love the emotion tugs, from start to finish, sad, chuckle then irony! Awesome work!
