writing on water...

So true, my friend....either the words..and the rhythm
                                meld in syncopation
                                or the poem simply struggles.....
                                 to remain afloat.....

A very creative comparison.....ingenious and intuitive!

philosophy of a drifter..:)

thanks, Enchantress...

. . .sounds like my heart. . .Excellent observation, Sir Paul. . .Impressed by your little trinkets. . .as always. . .xo, Devlin;)

oh you're definitely going somewhere, Dev..:)

hahahahahahaha

oshit, i forgot what i was laffin a'bout

i'll go beach...see if it'll come to me, & write it on my next wave

sure - make
a splash...

Perfect metaphorical piece. Stagnancy stinks.

it does!

there used to be a pond
nearby where I lived...
all I'm saying is
don't go there..:)

unsinkable poetry...

thanks, John...

I can but hope you are writing with waterproof ink and paper - you really dont want it soggy :-p

oh I never
object
to being
a little moist...

There is more to this than the surface tension level.

nah, I'm pretty shallow...