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I Promised You I'd Try
I promised you both that I would try.
To be happy after you died.
I'm sorry mom and dad.
I feel like I lied.
Please don't be mad.
I promised you I'd try.
To be happy after you died.
I'm sorry mom and dad.
I feel like I lied.
Please don't be mad.
I promised you I'd try.
Published 25th Sep 2015
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25th Sep 2015 5:43am
a very heart felt write Kavik though I think you are trying which is excellent..
love Brenda
love Brenda
25th Sep 2015 1:27pm
25th Sep 2015 6:40pm
Such intense, and raw emotions. Some promises are slow to fulfill. This is a relatable ink, Sweet Kavik. Respectfully, blue angel
4th Oct 2015 4:59am
31st Dec 2015 5:25pm
As long as you try, with all your spirit & soul, I believe you are by your work, that's the most anyone can do. Reflect a bit, really deep. No matter how small, find yourself an achievement & pat yourself on the back. Something we all should do.➰
