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Walk of Shame
Hot bourbon breathe
Liquified thoughts
Eases my lady into
Whore
Tall stranger
Dangerous blue eyes
Pulling by hips to dance
Floor
Sex and saxophone
Turn incendiary air
Unhealthy levels pure animal
Pheromone
Overcome this night
By slow grind in rhythm
I leave with him certain
Moan(my)own
Riding hard my
Demons and by demons
Hits suicide pitch
Ecstasy
Fades to black
Wake cloaked in shame
Strangers arm feels ugly
Around(me)
Liquified thoughts
Eases my lady into
Whore
Tall stranger
Dangerous blue eyes
Pulling by hips to dance
Floor
Sex and saxophone
Turn incendiary air
Unhealthy levels pure animal
Pheromone
Overcome this night
By slow grind in rhythm
I leave with him certain
Moan(my)own
Riding hard my
Demons and by demons
Hits suicide pitch
Ecstasy
Fades to black
Wake cloaked in shame
Strangers arm feels ugly
Around(me)
Published 23rd Sep 2015
| Edited 24th Sep 2015
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23rd Sep 2015 3:47pm
23rd Sep 2015 3:52pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Sep 2015 4:38pm
23rd Sep 2015 4:37pm
A realistic commentary about the pull of lust fueled by bourbon (my kinda drink) and a bedroom, backseat of a vehicle, hell front seat if you will. Whore. There is such a person, I suppose, but the attraction of the opposite sex, or the same sex, to the point where everything except the hot and heavy desire to fuck said opposite sex gets in the way of what is supposed to be "normal." Piss on "normal.
23rd Sep 2015 5:00pm
Jerry you shouldn't sugar coat things so, say what you mean lol seriously, you are spoiling me. I love it. Muuaagh!💋
💙Jennifer
💙Jennifer
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 7:38pm
Jennifer, beautifully luscious ink.. really love the imagery.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
23rd Sep 2015 7:39pm
23rd Sep 2015 9:54pm
The walk of shame might be an ongoing cycle. The guilt might inspire thoughts of "never again," but then that stranger with the dangerous blue eyes doesn't buy it.
"Riding hard my
Demons and by demons
Hits suicide pitch
Ecstasy
Fades to black
Wake cloaked in shame
Strangers arm feels ugly
Around(me)"
Is the shame of the morning after worth the ecstasy of the night before? This is usually a tough call. A fine and thoughtful write Jennifer.
"Riding hard my
Demons and by demons
Hits suicide pitch
Ecstasy
Fades to black
Wake cloaked in shame
Strangers arm feels ugly
Around(me)"
Is the shame of the morning after worth the ecstasy of the night before? This is usually a tough call. A fine and thoughtful write Jennifer.
23rd Sep 2015 9:57pm
It sure aint no more lol thank you darlin. Love your thoughtful comments Crow.
🚬💋Jennifer
🚬💋Jennifer
23rd Sep 2015 10:09pm
"eases my lady into whore"-awesome..."hits suicide pitch"-fanfuckingtastic...well done;)
23rd Sep 2015 10:20pm
I read this and immediately envision myself in New Orleans at a dark n smoky club, on Bourbon St, tipsy, and horny, rocking to music, waiting and waiting for 'tall drink of water' to come along and scratch my itch. (youthful fantasy wayyyy back when...)
Sexy visual....
Sexy visual....
23rd Sep 2015 11:31pm
24th Sep 2015 3:03am
Amazing how we humans can go through so many emotions at the speed of lightning. Enjoyed.
24th Sep 2015 3:05am
25th Sep 2015 4:01am
The demon knows what we need now, but not in the morning. The style had a bit of fun flair to it, Calamity. Nice write.
25th Sep 2015 2:06pm
Thank you very much Dp, always appreciate your reads and insight.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
25th Sep 2015 3:31pm
A little too much booze will make you do things you regret later. A well told tale Jennifer.
John
John
25th Sep 2015 4:08pm
29th Sep 2015 00:31am
Pure instinctual sex poetry at its finest. I can hear her moans and feel the pulse of hot blooded sex through your powerful words. The animal magnetism is strong here.
John
John
29th Sep 2015 00:47am
Can't tell you how much your praise and attention mean to me John. Been at it, writing everyday trying to find my voice and avoiding a comfort zone.
Finally cumming into my own with courage and confidence.
Your subscribing to me gives great incentive to write my best. New writer relatively. Just a few months, but it feels really nice.
Big kiss on for head for this, have made my evening. ....could go al)llll week on the high i feel right now.
💋Jennifer
Finally cumming into my own with courage and confidence.
Your subscribing to me gives great incentive to write my best. New writer relatively. Just a few months, but it feels really nice.
Big kiss on for head for this, have made my evening. ....could go al)llll week on the high i feel right now.
💋Jennifer
