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the ins & outs of it all...
she said she'd fallen out
of love - I couldn't
blame her, being quite
clumsy myself...
although, I can't help
thinking, now, that I rather wish
she hadn't fallen in
the first place...
Published 22nd Sep 2015
| Edited 23rd Sep 2015
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 00:12am
So I will extend the same back to you. . .
You do have a way
w/short poetry. . .
don't you. . .:)
I've always found your trinket masterpieces to be brilliant, Sir Paul, that's why I remain a true fan. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
You do have a way
w/short poetry. . .
don't you. . .:)
I've always found your trinket masterpieces to be brilliant, Sir Paul, that's why I remain a true fan. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
trinkets...yes I really like that..:)
DH Lawrence called his short
pieces Pansies, but I prefer
trinkets..!
DH Lawrence called his short
pieces Pansies, but I prefer
trinkets..!
23rd Sep 2015 1:02am
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23rd Sep 2015 2:30am
it's funny how we can't enter into love gracefully; it only occurs by being unbalanced...
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 2:49am
when we fall out..don't we fall into something else?
24th Sep 2015 00:51am
regarding love....too often, there are so many miss-steps....and mistakes..... :,((
24th Sep 2015 1:38pm
falling in (or out of) love
always
re-minded me of
mixing metaphors,
though technically........uh, nevermind
always
re-minded me of
mixing metaphors,
though technically........uh, nevermind
