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My glasses no longer work
For me
I wear them to see my children
And children playing
To see this sunrise that moon
Chop herbs finely
To catch you dancing
But not to pour scotch
Or to feel my lonely skin
Or to see a sea breeze
Or Coltrane or memories
Or this human hullabaloo
And its trampled
For me
I wear them to see my children
And children playing
To see this sunrise that moon
Chop herbs finely
To catch you dancing
But not to pour scotch
Or to feel my lonely skin
Or to see a sea breeze
Or Coltrane or memories
Or this human hullabaloo
And its trampled
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Re. 76
19th Sep 2015 9:41pm
Whale a very beautiful beginning stanza with a poignant ending..
excellent with love Crim
excellent with love Crim
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Re: Re. 76
19th Sep 2015 11:20pm
Re. 76
19th Sep 2015 10:19pm
Re. 76
19th Sep 2015 10:36pm
some mornings, I hesitate before
opening my curtains, thinking: there's
a whole world out there, but I'm not sure
if I can take it...
opening my curtains, thinking: there's
a whole world out there, but I'm not sure
if I can take it...
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Re: Re. 76
19th Sep 2015 11:22pm
Re: Re. 76
20th Sep 2015 6:54am
Re. 76
Anonymous
20th Sep 2015 6:11am
Sometimes the only way to protect certain things is by selective vision.

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Re: Re. 76
20th Sep 2015 6:56am
Re. 76
20th Sep 2015 2:58pm
O--how our life...our very existence.... so frequently depends on whether one" looks " with one's eyes........or " s e e s " with one's heart....
Inked with Insight....my friend!
Inked with Insight....my friend!
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Re: Re. 76
20th Sep 2015 3:48pm
Re. 76
22nd Sep 2015 9:14pm
..please don't take offense to what I'm about to say because it's meant as a compliment, but, I didn't realize how great you truly are as a writer. I only connect a few times with your ink before my poetic-sabbatical, so returning and reading ink with re-focused eyes, I'm realizing, you are very talented. :)
Pen on~
Pen on~
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Re: Re. 76
22nd Sep 2015 10:43pm