Indelible

ms crimson, this such a beautiful
write. > that flows so seamlessly
You have created a picture easily seen. So full of soft emotions.
Love the line"so with bound feet
I will quietly exit" I enjoyed reading
this side of you.

Keith

thank you graciously Keith for such a lovely comment :)

with love Crimsin

Solemn yet very beautiful piece of work my dear lady Crim! :)

thank you Poe I cherish your thoughts and visits..

with love Crim

nice, Crim de la Crim...

thank you graciously Dean..

with love Crim

Such a lovely read 😁
Always a pleasure to read your poetry 😄

thank you DC love your thoughts and visits..

with love Crim

Brenda, this is a brilliant beauty of a write.. such imagery you weave, and the longing for love, and hope.. great read.. with love..



Dave

thank you most kindly Dave for the lovely comment :)

with love Brenda

You have left Your mark Brenda with every write.

  Dantalian

thank you graciously Dantalian as you have on my heart as well with your ink and friendship..

with love Brenda

I love this Crim.  It contains heartache but ends on a note of strength.

"hiding amongst the shattered remains  
of tea cup femininity and corset restrictions"  

Perfect wording!  I take this as seeking freedom from repression, and it couldn't be better expressed.

"  so with bound feet  
I quietly exit "

This sounds submissive, and yet:

"knowing in my core
I was here and left my indelible mark"

You're getting the upper hand and no way you'll ever be forgotten.  Fine work!  

thank you Sir Crow for reading between the lines and getting what I was feeling..

with love Crim

"sitting primly in my glass tower  
looking out at the sea at dawn" -  lovely melancholy filled ink. It'll never fade or wash away. Delicate images to savor. Swak- blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel for showing love to this write and understanding the emotions I was conveying..

with love Crim

really well expressed -
and yes - memorable
indeed...

thank you kindly Paul..

with love Crim

thank beautiful one for making my day with your loving comments..

love Brenda

Very beautiful! Loved it! 💕Sissy

thank you Sissy for a beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

beautiful poetry set among tea cups & corsets, Crim, then moving sublimely offstage like a geisha...

thank you John your comments are poetry :)

with love Crim

A princess in a gilded cage...a broken heart...a dream of fantasy...
A beautiful write Ms Crimsin! Be you no man's captive.

thank you Sandman for deciphering a broken heart in this write and leaving your thoughts..

with love Crim

beautiful! I love it.

thank you kindly Caity :)

with love Crim

Wow! don't know how these verses flow into your head..

my aching vessel reaches to you  
though your a phantom  
 
a wisp of smoke  
over an untroubled lake

love it

thank you graciously Vick it was a broken heart that inspired me..

with love Crim

I bow to you sweetie. Great write. I loved it. <3

thank you most graciously lovely lady :)

with love Crim

Wow love how this poem just flow's.
You have such a great range when it comes to writing. Great ink crim

thank you graciously Sir I try to mix it up a bit :)

with love Crim

Another great poem from a great poet I love it

thank you kindly Kavik :)

with love Crim

Beautiful imagery

Sorry for such a paltry comment, but just want you to know I'm reading and enjoying as always. I've been a bit distant and distracted, not really here nor there. But I appreciate your work as always.

thank you Harlie for such a lovely comment I appreciate you :)

with love Crim

This is a beautiful write, my lady!  It's also the second time in a row that I've hit Random and had one of yours pop up...and the other one was as different in content from this one as night and day  ;)  ....both beautifully written and clearly Crimsin  :)

thank you beautiful Willow happy you found this one I'm very fond of it so pleased you liked it :)

love Crim