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What a difference......
Today is so different,
my mind is free and clear.
Beautiful images and
sounds that I hear.
Skies so blue,
wisps of white
flowing through.
Trees alive with song
this is where I belong.
Not locked in a dark
space created by me.
I want to love and be
loved; just happy.
Today happiness
shines so bright,
No longer trapped
in that dark night.
These tricks my
mind plays,
Sometimes go
on for days.
I'll take this reality for
what it is worth;
Void of sadness
and hurt.
Joy in place of pain,
sunshine, no chance
of rain.
All brought on
by a ray of love,
delivered by
a sweet Angel
from above.
my mind is free and clear.
Beautiful images and
sounds that I hear.
Skies so blue,
wisps of white
flowing through.
Trees alive with song
this is where I belong.
Not locked in a dark
space created by me.
I want to love and be
loved; just happy.
Today happiness
shines so bright,
No longer trapped
in that dark night.
These tricks my
mind plays,
Sometimes go
on for days.
I'll take this reality for
what it is worth;
Void of sadness
and hurt.
Joy in place of pain,
sunshine, no chance
of rain.
All brought on
by a ray of love,
delivered by
a sweet Angel
from above.
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Re. What a difference......
13th Sep 2015 5:58pm
This is a lovely piece Keith. I understand the roller coaster of heart sickness. When the ride stops, the euphoria of the freedom from it, is a great high. But we can't get there without processing the darkness. Thanks for the uplift!
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Re: Re. What a difference......
13th Sep 2015 6:51pm
Thank you for wonderful comment.
Really appreciate your insight on the
subject. Ms Looloolookie I hope
have a day filled with happiness.
Thanks again for stopping by
Keith
Really appreciate your insight on the
subject. Ms Looloolookie I hope
have a day filled with happiness.
Thanks again for stopping by
Keith
Re. What a difference......
Anonymous
13th Sep 2015 6:22pm
Great!!! I can did all the confusion . . . As "they" say . . . Been there . . . Done that . . .
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Re: Re. What a difference......
13th Sep 2015 6:54pm
Re. What a difference......
13th Sep 2015 9:38pm
I hate when my moods roller coasters! It drives the family crazy! Enjoyed the read Keith! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. What a difference......
14th Sep 2015 1:02am
Sissy I am thankful for your kind
words. I always look forward
to hearing from you.
Keith
words. I always look forward
to hearing from you.
Keith
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14th Sep 2015 00:52am
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14th Sep 2015 00:03am
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14th Sep 2015 00:58am
Re. What a difference......
14th Sep 2015 4:59am
Beautifully written, I too have been in this exact state of mind...and i take it all in while i can
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Re: Re. What a difference......
15th Sep 2015 1:57am
Well thank you for your understanding,
kind words. I would also like to thank
you for the read and taking the time to
comment
kind words. I would also like to thank
you for the read and taking the time to
comment
Re. What a difference......
Anonymous
14th Sep 2015 5:08am
It's great. So clearly expressed. That near-euphoric feeling when the sun peeks through the clouds of gloom. It's a beautiful expression positive sensations.
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Re: Re. What a difference......
15th Sep 2015 1:59am
Derrick it is so good to hear from you.
Thank you for your thoughtful comments
and kind words
Keith
Thank you for your thoughtful comments
and kind words
Keith
Re. What a difference......
15th Sep 2015 6:24pm
Know all about floundering in that darkness, Keith... I'm so glad your angel has shined her light upon you. You are blessed.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. What a difference......
16th Sep 2015 4:24am
Michael thank you for your always kind and understanding words.
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith
Re: Re. What a difference......
16th Sep 2015 4:24am
Michael thank you for your always kind and understanding words.
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith
Re: Re. What a difference......
16th Sep 2015 4:24am
Michael thank you for your always kind and understanding words.
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith
I am good today but who knows about tomorrow> gonna enjoy today.
Keith