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After The Red Tent
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Marriage tent quivers.
Older bride blushes.
Her hopes high as the
desert sand at dusk ~
She sighs I love you.
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Marriage tent quivers.
Older bride blushes.
Her hopes high as the
desert sand at dusk ~
She sighs I love you.
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Written by
shakka
(shauna)
Published 12th Sep 2015
| Edited 13th Sep 2015
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Re. After The Red Tent
12th Sep 2015 3:36pm
Re. After The Red Tent
12th Sep 2015 5:34pm
Re. After The Red Tent
Anonymous
13th Sep 2015 1:09am
Interesting...how an older bride would grip with such hopes with the analogy of a height of a tent..by being so loving and wishing to be loved.
The book, The Red Tent was just as interesting as this poem..I like the concise way of leaving much to the reader's imagination.
Note: was dessert intentional or should it be desert for 4L?
The book, The Red Tent was just as interesting as this poem..I like the concise way of leaving much to the reader's imagination.
Note: was dessert intentional or should it be desert for 4L?
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Re. After The Red Tent
13th Sep 2015 1:53am
Re. After The Red Tent
13th Sep 2015 7:06am
nomadic lovers, led me to research the book briefly.
& yes, 'desert sand' in line 4...
& yes, 'desert sand' in line 4...
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Re. After The Red Tent
13th Sep 2015 4:29pm
Re. After The Red Tent
13th Sep 2015 4:29pm
Re. After The Red Tent
13th Sep 2015 4:30pm
Re. After The Red Tent
14th Sep 2015 1:17am
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