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After The Red Tent
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Marriage tent quivers.
Older bride blushes.
Her hopes high as the
desert sand at dusk ~
She sighs I love you.
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Marriage tent quivers.
Older bride blushes.
Her hopes high as the
desert sand at dusk ~
She sighs I love you.
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Published 12th Sep 2015
| Edited 13th Sep 2015
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2015 1:09am
Interesting...how an older bride would grip with such hopes with the analogy of a height of a tent..by being so loving and wishing to be loved.
The book, The Red Tent was just as interesting as this poem..I like the concise way of leaving much to the reader's imagination.
Note: was dessert intentional or should it be desert for 4L?
The book, The Red Tent was just as interesting as this poem..I like the concise way of leaving much to the reader's imagination.
Note: was dessert intentional or should it be desert for 4L?
13th Sep 2015 1:53am
13th Sep 2015 7:06am
nomadic lovers, led me to research the book briefly.
& yes, 'desert sand' in line 4...
& yes, 'desert sand' in line 4...
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