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Bar Dance
Last dance, last chance... it's fuck romance,
We're just lookin' to score.
Eyes meet, thighs greet, turn up the heat...
Near fuck on the dance floor.
Lips locked, squeezed cock hard as a rock,
You make your wishes known.
Eyes glazed, leg raised, your cunt is grazed,
Sweet mouth yielding soft moan.
Slow song too long, I feel your thong;
Eyebrows raise with the pull.
Head tilt, no guilt, I find your melt
Neath skirt, fingers in full.
Tight slide, toes glide, carried outside
To the bed of my truck.
Sweet lips to tip catch pre-cum drip.
Panties drop...time to fuck!
Legs spread, your head laid flat to bed,
You rub mound, I spread cheeks.
Ass ream, you scream, I spill, you cream...
See you again next week.
Published 9th Sep 2015
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9th Sep 2015 10:59pm
10th Sep 2015 00:18am
Ha! Yeah, let's see em make a movie bout this...lol. Appreciate you stoppin by, MV. Glad you enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
10th Sep 2015 7:40pm
A really fun erotic, Michael. Great rhyme scheme and structure! You tell an exciting tale then include that "see you again next week" as a punch line. Well done!
11th Sep 2015 2:00am
Thank you Sir Crow... was thinking it must of came off really dry here. I'm guessing convoluted rhyme schemes and erotic aren't necessarily a good mesh... mental note taken there. Anyhow, glad you got the poem the way it was intended. Thank you for the read and for the comment. :)
Michael
Michael
11th Sep 2015 7:04am
12th Sep 2015 3:45am
11th Sep 2015 2:16pm
My first thought was, "this is a hoe-down". Ha! Get it? Yeah. Anyway. It has a very rhythmic style and I actually read it in a type of country song line dance sort of feel. Needless to say, that is the dance we dance for. Really great control in your words and rhyming.
12th Sep 2015 3:49am
It's always a hoe-down at this particular bar, lol. I appreciate your stopping by and commenting, DPW. It was odd coming to that rhyme scheme... don't really listen to too much country anymore, but it certainly does fit, now that you mention it. That's almost scary!
Michael
Michael
17th Oct 2015 4:32am
i once saw a couple
on the floor
she had a skirt side slit
nothing in it
he had a zipper sliding
nothing hiding
a long one trying to peep
and
as the lights dimmed
they did win
was in
she said ouch
he said no ,
no couch
said he
then on the floor
like doing a salsa
he did it many a times
till she yelled
hold me man
it cums.....
on the floor
she had a skirt side slit
nothing in it
he had a zipper sliding
nothing hiding
a long one trying to peep
and
as the lights dimmed
they did win
was in
she said ouch
he said no ,
no couch
said he
then on the floor
like doing a salsa
he did it many a times
till she yelled
hold me man
it cums.....
