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Madness
I feel a little bit of everything,
And something in between.
I'm a small thing,
Trapped within a dream.
Maybe you'll swallow easy,
If I tell you it's all a story.
Truth is simple to hide behind happy.
What have I become? I'm sorry.
And something in between.
I'm a small thing,
Trapped within a dream.
Maybe you'll swallow easy,
If I tell you it's all a story.
Truth is simple to hide behind happy.
What have I become? I'm sorry.
Published 9th Sep 2015
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9th Sep 2015 4:04am
13th Sep 2015 4:31am
Anonymous
9th Sep 2015 4:04am
So much subtext in this. Like your previous poem it's very cryptic. The font changes suggest quick mood changes.
" If I tell you it's all a story.
Truth is simple to hide behind happy. "
Secrets exposed, but still disclosed.
Nice work.
" If I tell you it's all a story.
Truth is simple to hide behind happy. "
Secrets exposed, but still disclosed.
Nice work.
13th Sep 2015 4:30am
I'm going for the whole cryptic thing, jk. I don't know what I'm doing besides spilling words onto a screen. Thanks man. Thanks for reading!
