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Real nice flow and schemes ( : Do you work with instrumentals at all?

thank you every once in a while but not professionally

Flow was really slick. "If this is Gotham, i'm Batman looking for Robin". Nice metaphor, possibly because I like comic-book movies/TV shows. Lol. One of the best acapellas i've heard and that's along with Jay-Z's Black Album Acapella version and some of those on Shady's label doing cyphers. I thought the flow of this one was more slick than the first one I commented on but I imagine you were going for more of a hip hop vibe on this one, compared to more of a poetic vibe on the other one? But yeah, it was amazing. Really enjoyed listening to it.

thank you i appreciate the feedback yeah i was going for more of a hip hop vibe im glad i succeeded in that lol never thought id be mentioned in the same sentence with jay z or so thank you for that  you have commented on a lot of my poems and that doesnt go unnoticed i am grateful for that i love batman a whole lot by the way lol

Awesome!!! Your techniques are awesome.