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Private Score
Hand over that dirty dollar baby
Its your secret thing to do
No need for modesty tonight
Friday is payday, I know this much is true
A smile for 1, a wink for maybe 2
Add some liquor and Ill lick my finger for you
Reach deep nasty boy, and I'll do the same
More money comes out, shame aint our game
Tuck in a 10 and I'll show you my tits
Pull out a 20 and you can peak at the slit
Flash a 50 in my face, and the tone has been set
Whenever the money gets real, my pussy becomes all wet
Tease me with a hundred, maybe even a few
Sucking and filthy fucking, this is all for you
Drench me in your money, I love it all the same
Scream out my name, that way I know you came
Before the night is over and the shadows are gone
Ill dance for you, Gentleman's Choice...one last song
And in the am when the sun tells me we're through
Ill roll over, ask whats for dinner and whisper thanks baby, I love you too.
Its your secret thing to do
No need for modesty tonight
Friday is payday, I know this much is true
A smile for 1, a wink for maybe 2
Add some liquor and Ill lick my finger for you
Reach deep nasty boy, and I'll do the same
More money comes out, shame aint our game
Tuck in a 10 and I'll show you my tits
Pull out a 20 and you can peak at the slit
Flash a 50 in my face, and the tone has been set
Whenever the money gets real, my pussy becomes all wet
Tease me with a hundred, maybe even a few
Sucking and filthy fucking, this is all for you
Drench me in your money, I love it all the same
Scream out my name, that way I know you came
Before the night is over and the shadows are gone
Ill dance for you, Gentleman's Choice...one last song
And in the am when the sun tells me we're through
Ill roll over, ask whats for dinner and whisper thanks baby, I love you too.
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Re. Private Score
6th Sep 2015 5:07am
Ironically I have been working on a similar piece, only it deals more with how guys can sometimes make their patron status something it isn't.
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Why thank you. As I was reading it a few times...the rhyme kinda made is fun and sassy. :P
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2015 7:41am
Mysterious, you made me hard on this write.. hot words.. with love..
Dave
Dave

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6th Sep 2015 2:53pm
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6th Sep 2015 2:34pm
Now that ending was a sweet surprise! But I loved the build up all the way thru! lol naughty n nice spill :)
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Sometimes the dirtiest times are times when we never leave the house! :)
Re. Private Score
6th Sep 2015 7:54pm
You've got a great erotic imagination Lady. I love that surprise ending! And the rest of it got quite a reaction, believe me. You scored with this one!
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6th Sep 2015 8:01pm
Re. Private Score
7th Sep 2015 7:57am
Nicely written a very visual tell of a dancer Friday night
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
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Re. Private Score
16th Sep 2015 2:26am
Hot Damn. I'll be right back...heading to the ATM! Wonderfully filthy and sexy at the same time! I like your style Lady!
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17th Sep 2015 12:58pm
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8th Nov 2015 9:28am
I think most men have a deep secret fantasy to have a private dancer... a dancer for money, that will do anything he wants her to do.
Smoking hot piece you've got there, mysteriouslady.
Smoking hot piece you've got there, mysteriouslady.
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8th Nov 2015 1:52pm
Re. Private Score
18th Jan 2020 8:10pm
This lover’s bedroom game sizzles!!! Roleplaying a lady of the evening heats things up to the flash point. Gives a whole new meaning to connubial. My God milady my pants are on fire!
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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