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SPIDER IRIS
Spider iris help me see-
The surrounding air -
is a web forming-
No one is apart -
yet everyone's alone-
You can't tear the fabric-
that attaches when we're born.
An insect with a conscience?
Just particles colliding?
An additive to the universe-
Destined for dying.......
The surrounding air -
is a web forming-
No one is apart -
yet everyone's alone-
You can't tear the fabric-
that attaches when we're born.
An insect with a conscience?
Just particles colliding?
An additive to the universe-
Destined for dying.......
Published 4th Sep 2015
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4th Sep 2015 4:53am
Jaspers spidy sense, right on. Very cool, eyes fragmented helping see fragmented...
Know this was more than litteral, reminds me of books, accounts of how children with autism see. Each strand of hair....
Thoughtful, deep, ink. Enjoyed again.
👀👀👀
Jennifer
Know this was more than litteral, reminds me of books, accounts of how children with autism see. Each strand of hair....
Thoughtful, deep, ink. Enjoyed again.
👀👀👀
Jennifer
Anonymous
5th Sep 2015 3:34am
Deep. philosophical piece. Makes me imagine a two-dimensional view, instead of three. Thought-provoking
