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3rd Sep 2015 2:07am
well to paraphrase one of my earlier
more pretentious pieces -
when a swallow leaves
fall...
(ugh!)
I find yours far more
thoughtful...
3rd Sep 2015 2:31am
Indeed, a time to let go. Such a profound beauty in so much said with so few words. Heartwarming.
Michael
Michael
3rd Sep 2015 3:52am
Pleasantly astounded with the way my mind connected your lines as you layered. I see the flight and feel the
inevitable here. the migration's formation paired doubly in emotional release.
I also feel the healthy release to evolution, onto the new, possibly warmer parts of life.
Love it when you tickle my brain with the obvious in beautiful capture, then feeling the hit of underlying emotion.
Evoking grand poetry sighs y'know! breathtaking and enjoyed,
~d
inevitable here. the migration's formation paired doubly in emotional release.
I also feel the healthy release to evolution, onto the new, possibly warmer parts of life.
Love it when you tickle my brain with the obvious in beautiful capture, then feeling the hit of underlying emotion.
Evoking grand poetry sighs y'know! breathtaking and enjoyed,
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Sep 2015 5:09am
3rd Sep 2015 5:08am
Profound last line.
Meaningful haiku, relatable not just to nature but human emotions as well. Beautifully captured!
3rd Sep 2015 6:23am
3rd Sep 2015 9:19am
the leaves tell it all ... Once vibrant with life, now withered and brittle ... Beautiful haiku
3rd Sep 2015 7:47pm
4th Sep 2015 00:12am
30th Dec 2015 5:08pm
I watch your tears fall off your
shaking limbs.
You toss your life into my face.
Falling, floating,
drifting to the earth.
I love Fall and your words!!! :)
shaking limbs.
You toss your life into my face.
Falling, floating,
drifting to the earth.
I love Fall and your words!!! :)
30th Dec 2015 5:39pm
One tree's tears become a blanket for the cold earth.
Thank you for your words.
Thank you for your words.
