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White
.
I watched as he got dressed
watched as he watched me
unashamedly still where he left me
the kiss goodbye
soft
sweet tasting on the tongue
with a promising hint of wait till later
White lace in a safe place
keepsake pocketing away
taking ownership
with remembrances during the day
that moment when he pulled them down
in doing so my consent given with taking
ownership of me too
I watched as he got dressed
watched as he watched me
unashamedly still where he left me
the kiss goodbye
soft
sweet tasting on the tongue
with a promising hint of wait till later
White lace in a safe place
keepsake pocketing away
taking ownership
with remembrances during the day
that moment when he pulled them down
in doing so my consent given with taking
ownership of me too
Published 27th Aug 2015
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 11:33pm
Rose,
Damn powerful write! Talk about taking charge....and just flat out taking! ;-)
Favorite line: "unashamedly still where he left me"
if that doesn't get the imagination hot, bothered and roaming......better be checking for a pulse!
Awesome!!!
tornado
Damn powerful write! Talk about taking charge....and just flat out taking! ;-)
Favorite line: "unashamedly still where he left me"
if that doesn't get the imagination hot, bothered and roaming......better be checking for a pulse!
Awesome!!!
tornado
28th Aug 2015 5:32am
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