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Splash
Lights out
Candles lit
Music streaming
Stripping bare
Steaming water
Drip, Drip
Essential oil
Sweet jasmine
Sliding in
Laying back
Skin tingling
Body glistens
Eyes closed
Pure relaxation
Mind wanders
You're there
Hips swaying
Pink begging
Hands answer
Gliding down
Commanding thoughts
Body reacting
Deep aching
Total submission
Water rages
White caps
Uncontrollable splashing
Diving DEEPER
Heavy breathing
Heaving chest
Throaty moans
Primal cries
Candles lit
Music streaming
Stripping bare
Steaming water
Drip, Drip
Essential oil
Sweet jasmine
Sliding in
Laying back
Skin tingling
Body glistens
Eyes closed
Pure relaxation
Mind wanders
You're there
Hips swaying
Pink begging
Hands answer
Gliding down
Commanding thoughts
Body reacting
Deep aching
Total submission
Water rages
White caps
Uncontrollable splashing
Diving DEEPER
Heavy breathing
Heaving chest
Throaty moans
Primal cries
Published 26th Aug 2015
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26th Aug 2015 3:42pm
27th Aug 2015 2:11pm
26th Aug 2015 3:46pm
and the joys of bath-time
well written
does what it says on the tin..
"Bath time fun to be enjoyed often" xD
well written
does what it says on the tin..
"Bath time fun to be enjoyed often" xD
27th Aug 2015 2:14pm
26th Aug 2015 4:46pm
Belle, this is wonderfully sensual! I love the flow and the build. Bravisima bella poeta!
27th Aug 2015 2:17pm
26th Aug 2015 7:21pm
Splish splash u keep taking that bath, yum yum I'd love to see that ass! lol...
27th Aug 2015 2:19pm
Too too cute PM
Was this a bit of humor or a bit of a confession? Hahaha
Was this a bit of humor or a bit of a confession? Hahaha
26th Aug 2015 8:37pm
"Love in the tub" (visualised). Favourite verses - five to the end.
A sensuous dramatic write.
Hope readers don't confuse your title with the mermaid movie starring Darryl Hannah!
A sensuous dramatic write.
Hope readers don't confuse your title with the mermaid movie starring Darryl Hannah!
27th Aug 2015 2:20pm
Hopefully they won't hun
No fin to be found beneath the water here. Hahaha
No fin to be found beneath the water here. Hahaha
26th Aug 2015 9:13pm
I can very easily picture you in all your beauty in the tub, Chelle. You make it easy. There's nothing like a fine lady in warm water bathing, then pleasuring herself. Finally creating a tidal wave....
27th Aug 2015 2:22pm
27th Aug 2015 00:35am
beautifully captured in words... each stanza holds fire and flow... a pleasure to behold and read :)
27th Aug 2015 2:31pm
I'm so happy that the fire I felt was truly conveyed in my piece darlin. Thanx so much for giving me a read hun
27th Aug 2015 1:45am
bath time should always be sensuous, Belle. I can picture you luxuriating in the bubbles...
27th Aug 2015 2:33pm
Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 00:12am
lilsouthernbelle,
if there's no white caps, you ain't doing it right! ;-) loving that smell of steamy jasmine.
tornado
if there's no white caps, you ain't doing it right! ;-) loving that smell of steamy jasmine.
tornado
1st Sep 2015 2:27pm
The scent is truly intoxicating
Isn't it Mr Tornado?
Thanx for the read hun
Isn't it Mr Tornado?
Thanx for the read hun
1st Sep 2015 2:33am
At least you kept it clean
Love poems that expands the mind to thoughts of hot steaming glistening skin dripping wet, smooth and soft begging for rough hands to touch. Thank you Belle
Love poems that expands the mind to thoughts of hot steaming glistening skin dripping wet, smooth and soft begging for rough hands to touch. Thank you Belle
