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Lighthouse Poetry
your poetic perfection
lingers on the wind
like sea spray
seducing my senses
touching my sweet spots
with the tales you weave
so delicate though strong of hand
tickling the lonely places in me
your adventures are something to behold
seen second hand through my mind's eye
sensual and seductive are your tales
brutal and raw breech at times
depending on what side you are revealing
loving all sides of your multifaceted beauty
rugged yet tender and true
a lighthouse showing weary sea goers the way home
this is what your poetry is to me
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 24th Aug 2015
| Edited 25th Aug 2015
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Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 4:31pm
Thats the sweetest piece, and it looks good on you doll. A cool juxta pose to the one you did, think it was Creaming for you. Both great in their own right and way. Both appreciating someone for their talents.
We are multifaceted, women. Different days, different ways.
Lovely.
🚬💋J
We are multifaceted, women. Different days, different ways.
Lovely.
🚬💋J
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Re: Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 5:01pm
thank you lovely Jennifer you have a keen eye as both poems were about the same poet..
yes today is a better day :)
with love Brenda
yes today is a better day :)
with love Brenda
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 5:30pm
Stunningingly beautiful Brenda. You knit such seductive words so effortlessly. Yes tickling the lonely places. xo
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25th Aug 2015 2:50pm
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Re: Re. Lighthouse Poetry
25th Aug 2015 2:52pm
thank you beautiful Taryn for feeling that tranquility and for making me smile :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 5:50pm
There is little more inspiring than a lighthouse standing sentinel by the sea. It has figured in various ways through art, poetry and literature, and you bring out the romance to perfection. A heroic image, Lady Crim, beautifully presented.
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25th Aug 2015 2:53pm
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 7:46pm
That is a lovely enlightened ink. As brightly written as a lighthouse. Keep it up, Crimsin!
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25th Aug 2015 2:54pm
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
24th Aug 2015 8:28pm
this is poetic perfection - it's light shines brightly giving all who care to see, inspiration
:-)
:-)
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25th Aug 2015 2:54pm
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 9:10pm
Brenda, brilliance divine, and personified.. this is beautifully done.. with love, and respect...
Dave
Dave
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25th Aug 2015 2:55pm
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Re. Lighthouse Poetry
26th Aug 2015 4:13am
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26th Aug 2015 4:19am
Re. Lighthouse Poetry
26th Aug 2015 6:17pm
!
A considerable change of pace from that "Demon Speak" piece you published!
I love the way you swing like a jumped-off teeter totter.
A considerable change of pace from that "Demon Speak" piece you published!
I love the way you swing like a jumped-off teeter totter.
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Re: Re. Lighthouse Poetry
26th Aug 2015 7:12pm
yes I like to switch things up :)
thank you for the visit and kind thoughts..
with love Crim
thank you for the visit and kind thoughts..
with love Crim