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And We Washed Our Weapons In the Sea
And we washed our weapons in the sea
The blade in the sheath so lovingly
The oils you provide glisten tastefully
As we wash our weapons in the sea
Life is stretched at the stopping of sand
Above the pommel graced with your hand
Your waters of Lethe wash my land
As life is stretched with the stopping of sand
Bathe me in your dipping pool
To unite our parts from our duel
Build the heat before we cool
Bathe me in your dipping pool
Cleanse me in the salt from your brine
And from your cup I taste the wine
My wand brings warmth from behind
Cleanse me in the salt from your brine
And we washed our weapons in the sea
Soul is pure and in motion harmony
There is no doubt, only certainty
As we washed our weapons in the sea.
The blade in the sheath so lovingly
The oils you provide glisten tastefully
As we wash our weapons in the sea
Life is stretched at the stopping of sand
Above the pommel graced with your hand
Your waters of Lethe wash my land
As life is stretched with the stopping of sand
Bathe me in your dipping pool
To unite our parts from our duel
Build the heat before we cool
Bathe me in your dipping pool
Cleanse me in the salt from your brine
And from your cup I taste the wine
My wand brings warmth from behind
Cleanse me in the salt from your brine
And we washed our weapons in the sea
Soul is pure and in motion harmony
There is no doubt, only certainty
As we washed our weapons in the sea.
Published 21st Aug 2015
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21st Aug 2015 5:30pm
Gawdsdamned beautiful!! I do hope you acquired plenty wounds in the washing here-- since I'm awash with your peaceful, cradling cadence & the shared passion of this sexy give and take..
And sweet darlins!.. the weaponry, indeed! I'm dubbing this one romantically doused to perfection..[in purrs]
"Life is stretched at the stopping of sand
Above the pommel graced with your hand
Your waters of Lethe wash my land
As life is stretched with the stopping of sand"
~simply perfect poetry, this verse is my fav! ..and the softly laid repetition does *wonders to/for the reader..(ty)
keeping this one on my list.. fer further lovins.
~d
And sweet darlins!.. the weaponry, indeed! I'm dubbing this one romantically doused to perfection..[in purrs]
"Life is stretched at the stopping of sand
Above the pommel graced with your hand
Your waters of Lethe wash my land
As life is stretched with the stopping of sand"
~simply perfect poetry, this verse is my fav! ..and the softly laid repetition does *wonders to/for the reader..(ty)
keeping this one on my list.. fer further lovins.
~d
21st Aug 2015 9:52pm
I am flattered to hear you compliment this piece in such the manner you did. You always acquire some cuts when you wash your weapons. But the pain feels good and they heal quickly. Thank you for addy as well :)
21st Aug 2015 6:16pm
Truly mythic eroticism, honoring a goddess with your sword. Your words really contain music here, and the line repetition at the beginning and end of each stanza is kind of like an ongoing echo. "To unite our parts from the duel" and other lines are a joy to read. My own weapon's a bit rusty these days, but I'm working on it...
21st Aug 2015 9:53pm
Definitely mythic as that is where I wanted it to be. Its nice to hear that they brought music to you. Sometimes a good spit-shine brings it back to life.
21st Aug 2015 7:43pm
that's a proper poem, that is...
I'm proper jealous, me..:)
but seriously,
excellent...
I'm proper jealous, me..:)
but seriously,
excellent...
21st Aug 2015 9:54pm
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21st Aug 2015 11:53pm
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22nd Aug 2015 00:06am
23rd Aug 2015 4:15pm
This is soft, it's an unusual take on erotica and I certainly appreciated it. The feeling of banishing the barriers and defences we all put up. Lovely write, thank you.
25th Aug 2015 11:49pm
In its most primal state, sex removes the boundaries or any presuppositions we have about anything. Thank you for the comment and read.
24th Aug 2015 2:34am
I have no idea where to even start, your words brought
such adornment unto my eyes.. wow.. your hands are
deeply dipped in inklings.. such a pleasure of airs.
such adornment unto my eyes.. wow.. your hands are
deeply dipped in inklings.. such a pleasure of airs.
25th Aug 2015 11:51pm
Its flattering to hear you say so. I appreciate the compliment about my hands (which many have complimented in their physical state as well..if you know what my mean, nudge, nudge). This is a nice piece, I have found.
24th Aug 2015 5:53am
very artful layout. lovers battle, conquer & surrender, to arrive at that harmony...
25th Aug 2015 11:51pm
Love is war and we all have our weapons, until we lay them down and examine their craftsmanship.
24th Aug 2015 3:13pm
25th Aug 2015 11:52pm
Thank you so very much! I am glad you loved it so. Appreciate the comment and read.
