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She's only sleeping
Thinking back, upon darkest days of life
An all I could for a while was cry
Fore and after saying morning prayers for you,
But that was before death took me,
I remember, watching my loves body being lowered
Till death do us part, No, no, I am not ready,
An as She’s being lowered, each inch lowered is a pain ripped down the grave of the heart
Earth, dirt and darkness being covered over,
She cant breathe… NO, she cant breathe, Please, please wait
Panic stricken… I ran over, freein her,
For it was one of the many things that I did not understand,
I was losing my woman, the girl that I love, my wife of over half my years,
Oh, strong were the ruins of life ahead I had in mind,
The minds made up, I’m going to act before God an earth cause more misery,
In the still of the night I returned, and I took her;
In grand position in my room, next to me, I place her, in a state of rest, she sleeps,
Like a Disney Princess, she’s sleeping,
She is not dead, she is sleeping, only sleeping,
Surrounded in all the very pretty colors that she likes,
My darlin, I’ll make love to you, if you tell me too,
No, was not ready, was not ready… wasn’t,,, I’m scared
Please, oh Lord, God help me.. Hate you, please, help me, hurts, so bad, to even breathe
And I still remember, till death do us part;
One night of binge drinkin, and its all over
An all I could for a while was cry
Fore and after saying morning prayers for you,
But that was before death took me,
I remember, watching my loves body being lowered
Till death do us part, No, no, I am not ready,
An as She’s being lowered, each inch lowered is a pain ripped down the grave of the heart
Earth, dirt and darkness being covered over,
She cant breathe… NO, she cant breathe, Please, please wait
Panic stricken… I ran over, freein her,
For it was one of the many things that I did not understand,
I was losing my woman, the girl that I love, my wife of over half my years,
Oh, strong were the ruins of life ahead I had in mind,
The minds made up, I’m going to act before God an earth cause more misery,
In the still of the night I returned, and I took her;
In grand position in my room, next to me, I place her, in a state of rest, she sleeps,
Like a Disney Princess, she’s sleeping,
She is not dead, she is sleeping, only sleeping,
Surrounded in all the very pretty colors that she likes,
My darlin, I’ll make love to you, if you tell me too,
No, was not ready, was not ready… wasn’t,,, I’m scared
Please, oh Lord, God help me.. Hate you, please, help me, hurts, so bad, to even breathe
And I still remember, till death do us part;
One night of binge drinkin, and its all over
Published 18th Aug 2015
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18th Aug 2015 11:23pm
"She cant breathe… NO, she cant breathe, Please, please wait"
~this line has me gasping for breath.. omfg.. fine writing..
"Like a Disney Princess, she’s sleeping,
She is not dead, she is sleeping, only sleeping,"
~love this morbidly romantic, soul-stuttering concept. dark? yes, perfect? Still, wolf darlins!
Also giggling.. 'cuz I remember one of the first of your poems that I'd read on dup.. I made sum such reference to the
power of your pen 'fucking Disney sideways".. [your sea witch one, maybe? idk, will needs look back now. ha!]
But rest assured, you still do spanketh Disney rightly!
"Please, oh Lord, God help me.. Hate you, please, help me, hurts, so bad, to even breathe
And I still remember, till death do us part;" <~~ * luv ur dark vowels. *swoon [dark sighs too]
~mindset, pain, gripping emotion- ur pen captures All. ..Amazing write, & hugs as needed Wolf..
~d
~this line has me gasping for breath.. omfg.. fine writing..
"Like a Disney Princess, she’s sleeping,
She is not dead, she is sleeping, only sleeping,"
~love this morbidly romantic, soul-stuttering concept. dark? yes, perfect? Still, wolf darlins!
Also giggling.. 'cuz I remember one of the first of your poems that I'd read on dup.. I made sum such reference to the
power of your pen 'fucking Disney sideways".. [your sea witch one, maybe? idk, will needs look back now. ha!]
But rest assured, you still do spanketh Disney rightly!
"Please, oh Lord, God help me.. Hate you, please, help me, hurts, so bad, to even breathe
And I still remember, till death do us part;" <~~ * luv ur dark vowels. *swoon [dark sighs too]
~mindset, pain, gripping emotion- ur pen captures All. ..Amazing write, & hugs as needed Wolf..
~d
19th Aug 2015 10:59pm
Have been away far too long from DU...
This is an utterly heartrending morbidly romantic piece that i just have to have in my Reading List. Amazing Ink Hun... Just absolutely superb.
I was even at the edge of the seat at Line 9 .... *exhales*
Wow... Enjoyed.
Darker.
This is an utterly heartrending morbidly romantic piece that i just have to have in my Reading List. Amazing Ink Hun... Just absolutely superb.
I was even at the edge of the seat at Line 9 .... *exhales*
Wow... Enjoyed.
Darker.
