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What is this?
Who am I?
What if I'm not me?
Is this real life or just a dream?
What am I?
Angel, demon, mortal, what?
Is this all just in someone else's mind?
Are we just one big science experiment?
Am I alive?
Am I dead?
I don't know what to do anymore,
This all just hurts my head!
What if I'm not me?
Is this real life or just a dream?
What am I?
Angel, demon, mortal, what?
Is this all just in someone else's mind?
Are we just one big science experiment?
Am I alive?
Am I dead?
I don't know what to do anymore,
This all just hurts my head!
Published 7th Jun 2011
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7th Jun 2011 1:41am
Is life real or are we stuck in a galaxy in a jewelery globe around a cats neck. Like in Men in Black. I love the flow of this poem. Especially the way it all coincides with 3 rd line and the last line. Taking ownership of your dream possibly all just in the head.
Brilliant.
Brilliant.
14th Jun 2011 00:27am
15th Jun 2011 11:44pm
Mhm. I agree with you here.
And i think you are such a talented wrter.
I feel your poems and i like that.
Amazing [;
And i think you are such a talented wrter.
I feel your poems and i like that.
Amazing [;
15th Jun 2011 11:46pm
