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my trusty desk...
I love my desk
it doesn't lock
and yet I trust it
will not talk
I love my desk
it's made of wood
and keeps my secrets
like a good
desk
should...
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Re. my trusty desk...
12th Aug 2015 1:32am
Re: Re. my trusty desk...
12th Aug 2015 12:26pm
Re. my trusty desk...
Anonymous
12th Aug 2015 3:35am
I like the fact that your desk's imperfect but still you trust it. Very deep lines, reading between them. ;-)
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Re: Re. my trusty desk...
12th Aug 2015 12:27pm
Re. my trusty desk...
12th Aug 2015 2:58pm
......and in a world...in an era...where so few things, and even fewer people, can truly be trusted....
('Tis fortunate for you, you have such a loyal confidant ...) :p
('Tis fortunate for you, you have such a loyal confidant ...) :p
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Re: Re. my trusty desk...
12th Aug 2015 4:10pm
Re. my trusty desk...
13th Aug 2015 10:58pm
You let the reader in, on a humorous yet obviously important topic. I like this, my storage chest at work probably means a similar amount to me. Thanks for this, makes me itch to see the desk. I am weird, it's not news to those who know me. You had me hooked here. It's light and playful and plain, easy read. Cheers again.
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Re: Re. my trusty desk...
13th Aug 2015 11:02pm
Re. my trusty desk...
14th Aug 2015 00:46am
I just bought a new desk this week, there had been a breech of trust between me and my old desk :-)
now I just need to work out who is crazier - you or me?
excellent ink as always :-)
now I just need to work out who is crazier - you or me?
excellent ink as always :-)
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Re: Re. my trusty desk...
14th Aug 2015 00:56am