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Tanka
Tiny footsteps
Leading to a decorative pond
It had lilies and leaves
A scream tore the sky apart
Lilies and leaves
Tiny footsteps
Leading to a decorative pond
It had lilies and leaves
A scream tore the sky apart
Lilies and leaves
Published 8th Aug 2015
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9th Aug 2015 00:32am
9th Aug 2015 1:13pm
Sylvia Plath only needed a hot bath...I bet it was hot in that oven. Your piece reminds me of "Goldfish" by the previously named. Were you inspired or perhaps the same muse comes to you. Thank you. Genacherib11
