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Floating
Finally, a day off all to me,
I am laying in the shade, drunk at 3
floating under a blue summer breeze
while the hammock just beneath
soothingly sways and swings
I am laying in the shade, drunk at 3
floating under a blue summer breeze
while the hammock just beneath
soothingly sways and swings
Published 7th Aug 2015
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7th Aug 2015 11:00pm
I feel more relaxed just reading this. "A blue summer breeze." This reminds me of the Kinks' "Sunny Afternoon" only without any "tales of drunkenness and cruelty." This is pure pleasure Sammy. Enjoy your day off!
9th Aug 2015 6:06pm
Really glad you enjoyed it. I hope you have a day like that when you need it. I know I needed it. haha
8th Aug 2015 5:26am
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9th Aug 2015 6:09pm
It was a nice escape. I hope you have days like this when you need them. :) Thanks for the comment!
8th Aug 2015 4:23pm
Ahhhh Sammy - You definitely got me with this one. My whole left side went numb. Good thing I was holding the beer in my right hand. You got me floating and I don't even need wings. Thanks for the uplift Sammy. Namyh
9th Aug 2015 6:12pm
Hahaha I love this comment. Thanks. Glad this had such a nice impact. haha. Don't drop the beer!
14th Aug 2015 7:54pm
So relaxing, can just picture myself doing this tomorrow, if only it would stop raining
