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The only He.
I spend hours,
hours -
trying to make sense of you,
to make sense of us
and the quiet hours bathe me
in the white light of our innocence
in the deep relief of our future
in the silence of our enduring love
and I could not be
more blessed.
hours -
trying to make sense of you,
to make sense of us
and the quiet hours bathe me
in the white light of our innocence
in the deep relief of our future
in the silence of our enduring love
and I could not be
more blessed.
Published 7th Aug 2015
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13th Aug 2015 3:42pm
ImperfectedStone, luv ~ :-*
This poem is sheerly beautiful, magnificent in its simplicity of line and structure and, oh yes, meaning. :-*
You've managed to convey so very much, emote such intensity and immensity of feeling, such depth and expanse to it; tis all-encompassing, really.
And, that's glorious! So rare, so very precious, such treasure the two of you share, luv...
Always remember. :-*
No matter the vicissitudes of life...
You have an astounding poetic presence: unmistakable, vibrant, profound, as a thunderclap of pure poesy. :-*
I am deeply honored to read your works, luv.
This poem is sheerly beautiful, magnificent in its simplicity of line and structure and, oh yes, meaning. :-*
You've managed to convey so very much, emote such intensity and immensity of feeling, such depth and expanse to it; tis all-encompassing, really.
And, that's glorious! So rare, so very precious, such treasure the two of you share, luv...
Always remember. :-*
No matter the vicissitudes of life...
You have an astounding poetic presence: unmistakable, vibrant, profound, as a thunderclap of pure poesy. :-*
I am deeply honored to read your works, luv.
13th Aug 2015 4:49pm
I am glad this captured you and held you. It's hard sometimes to convey deep meaning through simplicity. I am happy it translated the feeling for you. Thank you so much for your comments!
13th Aug 2015 4:31pm
in the silence of our enduring love
Knowing is powerful but rarely withstands silence unless pure; that, indeed, is the test of time.
Knowing is powerful but rarely withstands silence unless pure; that, indeed, is the test of time.
19th Aug 2015 8:18am
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26th Aug 2015 12:28pm
I've felt this many times before. I love the way that it is condensed into a singular thought in this write. Almost Shakespearian in its lyrical quality.
Dig it.
Dig it.
26th Aug 2015 1:19pm
Thank you, Miss_Sub. I have a hazard of waffling on in writes, tried to avoid that here. Happy that you were pleased.
