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her shell...
her fingernails
are made of snails
and leave wet trails
on my skin
and with her shell
it's just as well
else how would I tell
if she's in...
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Re. her shell...
Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 2:28am
This piece oozes with erotic savor. . .A clever write, Paul S. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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7th Aug 2015 11:08pm
Re. her shell...
7th Aug 2015 6:48am
I don't know why this reminds me of Sharon Olde's The Connoisseuse of Slugs. But I get it.
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7th Aug 2015 11:09pm
Re. her shell...
7th Aug 2015 2:57pm
Ahhh...Paul, mo chara.....such an inventive innuendo.... :) Hmmmm...snails and "sensuality"....who would have thought....?? but then again, this is just another example of your wonderful wit! (Still smiling!!!!) xo
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7th Aug 2015 11:12pm
Re. her shell...
Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 4:08pm
Escorgot Dartford..slippery little suckers aren't they? ;)
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7th Aug 2015 11:14pm
Re. her shell...
8th Aug 2015 3:22am
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8th Aug 2015 12:33pm
Re. her shell...
8th Aug 2015 12:58pm
I once knew a snail called Michelle
who slimmed me with silvery jell
I asked her to halt
covered her with salt
she died and went straight to hell
who slimmed me with silvery jell
I asked her to halt
covered her with salt
she died and went straight to hell
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8th Aug 2015 11:51pm