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Reflection
Youthfully vibrant,
Parentally reliant,
Educationally compliant,
Subliminally defiant,
Maintaining submission,
Passive aggression,
Emotional repression,
Sexual concession,
Ideological oppression.
Parentally reliant,
Educationally compliant,
Subliminally defiant,
Maintaining submission,
Passive aggression,
Emotional repression,
Sexual concession,
Ideological oppression.
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Re. Reflection
6th Aug 2015 5:36am
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6th Aug 2015 5:45am
Some people tell me I have a stale writing style, I prove them wrong daily. 8) #swaglord
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6th Aug 2015 5:47am
Well if it counts I don't think your writing style is stale if anything it's far from that
I think you're a very unique writer really :)
I think you're a very unique writer really :)
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6th Aug 2015 6:01am
You know Rocky, it's comments like yours that make me think "damn, I'm so glad I made myself write today". I know my topics are fairly limited and I typically revolve around the same style and set of rhymes but, you know since I'm not doing much in my life right now I don't really have much material to write about you know. I was working on another one of my psycho love poems but then me and the girl ended our relationship so..inspiration went down the drain. I try to keep it fresh but it gets hard sometimes, but knowing you're there supporting me makes it a hell of alot better. :)
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Well I think just because you aren't in a relationship right now doesn't mean that you can't still write a nice love poem, I still do even though I just got out of a relationship awhile back and I still find the time to find some positive aspects about love. I think you're probably a little more focused on the negative of love which makes you not want to write about it.
Just let the good feeling emotions come to you and you'll be able to write one. :)
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6th Aug 2015 6:42am
Hahaha Rocky, for me good feelings about love ended long ago. Perhaps I should just stick to allegorical psycho love poems, video games, and feminism, I mean it got me this far right? Maybe I'll get back on the dating scene once college starts, if I care to, 40% motivation is just to get more writing material. :)
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I understand
Well all I can say for your love life is don't rush into a relationship if you're not emotionally ready yet Im kind of going through the same thing as well so im kind of just staying single for awhile.
However it doesn't hurt to try writing about different subjects as well so maybe you could touch on on other subjects other than love :)
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Re. Reflection
7th Aug 2015 3:31am
I gotta add to rocky here you have a different and unique way of writin and I love it alot. And fer the relationship stuff my opion loves dead most my poetry is bout that anyhow im on a rant. Nice poem tho peace.
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7th Aug 2015 3:47am
Well this is about as close to my old school angsty poetry as I'll get. I typically like to articulate my feelings and use metaphors to convey a point in a way that everyone can understand by reading it with their own experiences in mind. Bullshit aside thanks man, if you're into death poetry I would recommend my psycho love poems "Hand in Hand" and "You Loved I" i think you'll like it. :)