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So much more
Devout to hearing the hidden,
What appeared from the original edition,
Avoid paranoid admonitions, still on the mission
Sexual Clairvoyant vision,
Disreputable intuition checks what I'm risking
What's loud began within,
Friend to sin, extended spin
Hooked on a Feeling / Of adrenalin
Nothing cooked up concealing
Brushing up on everything I'm revealing
Appealing to a primal power
Rhyme showers divine flowers
Mind devours proprietary snares,
Spin for hours, diary of diablerie,
Like the twin towers, fiery blare
Sighing acquired by dares, I'll show you why
Liars, desires and scares flow by
Lions and tigers and bears, oh my
Wizard of Oz, blizzard doesn't pause
Dither the odds, replacing with each statement
Withering gods from ancient civilizations,
Awakening uncreations. Rip and prod
Flip my chops, from the tip of the top
Quicker pops, switch up Bodhi's crops,
Never missed the kicker, got picked to quip sicker,
Twisted picture, jigger my feet for every beat that drops
It's so much bigger than Hip Hop!
Trick slop, improv off, revolve when caught
Adapt and re-emerge composite-wrought
So the graphic urge to spit gets hot
Blast and blur the shit and pearls I got
What at last occurs outlasts the stir
Legacy allure in my stride
Whirlwind on the fly verbal massacre
The only thing truly sure
Is everything fades to black, whether
By God's wrath, Allah's math or Time elapse
So every track gets taken further past
This incident of Time's spin, event horizon
Already riding, unfiling my data stacks
Compression of human collection
Playing back, reaching the past
So I'm breaching that and actively seeking
To seed some magic in the leaking
Practicing what I'm preaching!
What appeared from the original edition,
Avoid paranoid admonitions, still on the mission
Sexual Clairvoyant vision,
Disreputable intuition checks what I'm risking
What's loud began within,
Friend to sin, extended spin
Hooked on a Feeling / Of adrenalin
Nothing cooked up concealing
Brushing up on everything I'm revealing
Appealing to a primal power
Rhyme showers divine flowers
Mind devours proprietary snares,
Spin for hours, diary of diablerie,
Like the twin towers, fiery blare
Sighing acquired by dares, I'll show you why
Liars, desires and scares flow by
Lions and tigers and bears, oh my
Wizard of Oz, blizzard doesn't pause
Dither the odds, replacing with each statement
Withering gods from ancient civilizations,
Awakening uncreations. Rip and prod
Flip my chops, from the tip of the top
Quicker pops, switch up Bodhi's crops,
Never missed the kicker, got picked to quip sicker,
Twisted picture, jigger my feet for every beat that drops
It's so much bigger than Hip Hop!
Trick slop, improv off, revolve when caught
Adapt and re-emerge composite-wrought
So the graphic urge to spit gets hot
Blast and blur the shit and pearls I got
What at last occurs outlasts the stir
Legacy allure in my stride
Whirlwind on the fly verbal massacre
The only thing truly sure
Is everything fades to black, whether
By God's wrath, Allah's math or Time elapse
So every track gets taken further past
This incident of Time's spin, event horizon
Already riding, unfiling my data stacks
Compression of human collection
Playing back, reaching the past
So I'm breaching that and actively seeking
To seed some magic in the leaking
Practicing what I'm preaching!
Published 5th Aug 2015
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5th Aug 2015 3:37pm
Wow that was truly incredible loved it rhyme scheme & your main point even more well wrote my friend
5th Aug 2015 8:52pm
Thanks for reading and catching the gist! Spirit is alive when shared, word is bond.
5th Aug 2015 9:09pm
This is inspired work Loki, both playful and profound. "Quicker pops, switch up Bodhi's crops" is a great riff while "Withering gods from ancient civilizations" strikes awe. Finally "Practicing what I'm preaching!" from a true wordsmith and man of action. Excellent!
6th Aug 2015 7:40am
5th Aug 2015 9:19pm
Very lively. I had to read it out loud to keep up with the rhymes. Seemed stream of consciousness? Like a purging of thought.
6th Aug 2015 7:40am
Stream of consciousness is very much my natural style. I'll have the audio up in a day or two. Thanks for giving it a vocal try!
7th Aug 2015 5:28pm
I love how your words make me work and strive to find the meaning behind it.
"By God's wrath, Allah's math or Time elapse " made me google and read a bit about supreme mathematics. Interesting stuff! Though I'm Christian, I'm also open to the idea that everyone is right and wrong about religion at the same time. While I don't usually go researching other religions in depth, it was interesting to read about, so thank you for that inspiration!
"Avoid paranoid admonitions" nice one! I love the word admonition, something that's stuck with me from when I was younger. I remember my dad explaining to me what it meant. I also love the cyclical nature of that simple line. Avoid being warned about things to avoid. :) Nice!
"By God's wrath, Allah's math or Time elapse " made me google and read a bit about supreme mathematics. Interesting stuff! Though I'm Christian, I'm also open to the idea that everyone is right and wrong about religion at the same time. While I don't usually go researching other religions in depth, it was interesting to read about, so thank you for that inspiration!
"Avoid paranoid admonitions" nice one! I love the word admonition, something that's stuck with me from when I was younger. I remember my dad explaining to me what it meant. I also love the cyclical nature of that simple line. Avoid being warned about things to avoid. :) Nice!
