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Perfect Fit
Fortune’s shape manifest in your curvaceous perfection
Hips made for my hands
Buttocks which mould and merge seamlessly
In our tailor made embrace
Breasts which stand slightly proud
Of my encircling palms and fingertips
The measure matching exacting generosity
Akin to a baker’s enthusiastic cupping
Of your delicious ingredients
Nipples which match mouth, teeth and digits
To solicit sights, gasps and shouts
Lips which cushion like a comfortable couch
Eager like homecoming after absence
Mutual in interwoven appetites
Consummate in our coupling
Uncanny in our unification
Our elements ecstatically intermingle
Selfsame silken sliding passion-made Matryoshka doll
Hot wet perfect fit
Published 29th Jul 2015
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29th Jul 2015 11:51pm
Oh boy...I'm not sure if this is about the doll or a woman who is as perfect as that doll! Haha, very enjoyable poem, either way! Always love your clever word play and visuals.
1st Aug 2015 1:25am
The joy of artistic licence Looloo, it is whatever you wish it to be - I know what was going on in my mind when I wrote it... ;)
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30th Jul 2015 5:24am
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1st Aug 2015 1:26am
Glad you liked it Taryn - inspiration has been a little sporadic lately but this manifested quite easily...
30th Jul 2015 6:23am
1st Aug 2015 1:27am
Metaphor or literal...your mind is the brush to canvas here Solomon - thank you very much for reading and commenting!
30th Jul 2015 8:09am
She definitely is one hell of a woman to watch out for, your description embodies beauty in absolution.
I love this poetry house, such great unique and versatile talents
I love this poetry house, such great unique and versatile talents
1st Aug 2015 1:29am
Thank you Victoria - have you ever embraced someone and been almost shocked at how well you seems to fit together?
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30th Jul 2015 5:01pm
*blinks*
*ahem*
*blinks again*
.... i can't concentrate. so i can't haiku.
*ahem*
*blinks again*
.... i can't concentrate. so i can't haiku.
1st Aug 2015 1:31am
31st Jul 2015 9:39am
1st Aug 2015 1:32am
Awww thanks Toni - it's pleasing when it jumps onto the page - unfortunately my head space has been in other crazy places lately (all good places, just not creative poetry spaces). Let's hope as things settle I get a chance to indulge in this site a bit more.
I have missed reading all of the amazing poets lurking around here.
I have missed reading all of the amazing poets lurking around here.
