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Yours
How easy it is for you..
Turning me inside out
Vibrations resonate
Sounding your words
Evoking my animal
How you're going to take
Me...
Move over this body
Skin, tentacles electrical,
Puppet strings
Pulling me
Into you
Hunger growing
Teasing and teasing
Til tears well
I am helpless,
Encased in glass.
Couldn't run if I wanted to
Emotional escape
Not an option.
Dreamworlds
Into reality
The Fantasy
Tangible, locked into your stare.
And I rise and rise
Breath caught up
In your mouth
Exhaling on my lips
Pushed through gripped
Fingers on my hips
Bound hands reach
For you,
Nails aching to dig
Fragments of flesh
Can't leave a mark,
No one must know.
It's stolen,
I'm yours.
Turning me inside out
Vibrations resonate
Sounding your words
Evoking my animal
How you're going to take
Me...
Move over this body
Skin, tentacles electrical,
Puppet strings
Pulling me
Into you
Hunger growing
Teasing and teasing
Til tears well
I am helpless,
Encased in glass.
Couldn't run if I wanted to
Emotional escape
Not an option.
Dreamworlds
Into reality
The Fantasy
Tangible, locked into your stare.
And I rise and rise
Breath caught up
In your mouth
Exhaling on my lips
Pushed through gripped
Fingers on my hips
Bound hands reach
For you,
Nails aching to dig
Fragments of flesh
Can't leave a mark,
No one must know.
It's stolen,
I'm yours.
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Re. Yours
29th Jul 2015 6:05pm
I really like the way you converge reality and fantasy here Lookie. The last stanza is particularly intense, and that "I'm yours" is rewarding. "Sounding your words / Evoking my animal." Both beauty and the beast!
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Re: Re. Yours
29th Jul 2015 10:57pm
Thank you Mr.C, it's a fine balance the fantasy and reality. Trying to join the two is a challenge. Happy the ending is rewarding. Nothing worse than being left unsatisfied!
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Re: Re. Yours
29th Jul 2015 10:58pm
I love taking you along with me Taryn! So many journey's I've traveled in your writes. Loves Lisah (thought it was time to share my name ;))
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Re. Yours
29th Jul 2015 9:42pm
Very hot write Looloo - I can feel the intensity of your passion in the short fierce nature of the stanza's as you have written this. Blood surging keyboard pounding explosive poetry. Hot.
The last stanza offering teasing hints of the mind state of the 'other woman'.
Wow.
The last stanza offering teasing hints of the mind state of the 'other woman'.
Wow.
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Re: Re. Yours
29th Jul 2015 11:00pm
Franko...you leave me the best comments. Thanks for getting this, and reading, as always :)
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2015 1:04am
*ahem*
wow.
carry on. :)
wow.
carry on. :)
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30th Jul 2015 2:44am
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2015 4:51am
Hi Lookie......I read this off line a while ago...needed to come tell you sensual and beautiful this is.......enjoyed it much...xo :)
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Re: Re. Yours
30th Jul 2015 5:16pm
Thank you, Flower. For the read and lovely comment! And just taking the time. So glad you enjoyed this.
;)
;)
Re. Yours
30th Jul 2015 7:33am
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30th Jul 2015 5:18pm
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 7:37am
Miss, LooLoo, aside from an enjoyable read from beginning to end. . .it was the twist at the end that made me smile. . .Deviously. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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31st Jul 2015 3:56pm
Re. Yours
looloo, great read.fast paced sexy,hot
fav lines; Nails ached to dig
Fragments of flesh Gives me something
Can't leave a mark to sleep on....great EOD read
No one must know thanks sweets nite
It's stolen
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Re: Re. Yours
1st Aug 2015 8:13am
Love that you have fave lines ;)
And something to sleep on. Sweet dreams Mr.K.
And something to sleep on. Sweet dreams Mr.K.
Re. Yours
5th Aug 2015 6:20am
your pen is like a torch that release fire... beautifully written lookie ^^
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Re. Yours
11th Aug 2015 11:19pm
I love the steady stream of thought in this piece and how it bulids much like an orgasm.
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2016 6:28am
Love it.! Bring me more ✌💫
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Re. Yours
23rd Sep 2016 2:14pm